k im trying to ask a guy to a V-Day dance which poem shoud i put in the note?
#1. Be Mine:
What can i do
to make you love me
what can i do
to change your mind
What can i do
to make you love me
what can i do
to make you mine?
#2. Everything Is Wrong
When everything seems
to be going
down the drain
i hear your vice
and it saves me
from myself.
Your presence keeps me
from hiding away
in the dark.
#3. Never Know
How many times
do i have to say it
before you'll say it back
You're the only
thing on my mind
all i can see is black
I dont thinkg
you'll ever know
what you mean to me
but if i let
my feelings show
maybe you will see.
#4. That Girl
I want to go
somewhere else
and be
someone else
with people
who don't know me.
I'm sick of it here
sick of the fear
and the people
who know who i am.
No longer will i be
That Girl
from now on i will be
Your World
2007-02-02 12:05:14 · 7 answers · asked by Molly <3 CCL 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
we're both a little emo just fyi
2007-02-02 12:14:55 · update #1
he knows i like him and he sorta likes me
2007-02-02 12:46:35 · update #2
I agree with some of the other users... your poems are a little depressive... and... dare I say it... they sound a little desperate.
I'd be hesitant to express these types of emotions when I'm just trying to ask a guy out to a dance.
2007-02-02 12:31:06 · answer #1 · answered by ms_lain_iwakura 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think they are nice, but they all sound depressive. Write a new poem that would make him get happy and cheerful and dont talk about love just yet, wait until he is your boyfriend to say the word 'love' to him.
2007-02-02 20:12:49 · answer #2 · answered by Blueberry. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
#1- it's straight to the point. And most guys will not quite get the others without some background. I like the others though.
2007-02-02 20:16:13 · answer #3 · answered by Elizabeth O 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
# 1 or 2, cause they are cuter than the rest, but what kinda person he is might make the difference........ i'm sure he'll be impressed with whatever poem you use
2007-02-02 20:12:45 · answer #4 · answered by :) 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your poems are OK, but there is no way you can make someone say those things to you if it is not intention, to do so.
Simplify your poems, allow opened ended response, if the fuel is there, the fire will ignite.
2007-02-02 20:13:18 · answer #5 · answered by moeeeeus 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
# 2 is very nice .. the other ones are nice too, but a lil on the darkside.. that might scare him, so good luck I hope he says yes..
2007-02-02 20:09:35 · answer #6 · answered by michelle b 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
nothing
2007-02-02 20:08:20 · answer #7 · answered by Christina L 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋