Can you guess what this is? It is an everyday object.
Fists are my gods
and with great skill they guide me.
Across the smooth dance floor i glide
following the lead of a god.
Sliding, swooping, and swinging
my long, thin being
is what i do the whole day long.
When i dance i release ribbons
across my beautiful stage.
Through dance - release, a god and I
can do a variety of tasks.
We can deliever a message of joy or sorrow
We can give or take money away.
We can create wonderful works of art
There are many amazings things we can do,
it all depends on the stage.
What am I?
2007-02-02 07:47:19 · 15 answers · asked by speak 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
Its an object. A person isn't an object.
2007-02-02 07:57:27 · update #1
the paintbrush guess was kinda close
2007-02-02 07:58:44 · update #2
hun, if a broom could gave me money every time i use it..... i'd be rich
2007-02-02 08:04:40 · update #3
a pen or pencil, lol.
2007-02-02 08:17:35 · answer #1 · answered by This, That & such 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
feels like you're describing a witch or a succubus (a lady demon). Your seen descriptions are very sturdy. There are some awkward words like, "the body of she". Why no longer basically say "Her body"? the way i might want to positioned it: "Her body, compact and mild, can freeze her sufferers for all eternity." (miss the "of") i might want to punctuate the finest stanza otherwise: "now and again to others her sufferers will look blurred or washed out. yet in the winning day of attack, their fates are sealed." declaring their destiny has "appeared" sealed, is quite weak. It both is or isn't, and through this effectual poem, it ought to be more effective certainly sealed. be particular to video demonstrate your possessives and the nouns in apposition; i.e. "interior her gray outdoors, tender in layout, lies a rolling ribbon like a rattle snake's coil." (miss "that of") With quite tweaking to make your lines more effective concise and to the point, you've an staggering poem.
2016-10-17 04:53:21 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
A ballet dancer?
2007-02-02 07:50:50 · answer #3 · answered by Robert B 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pencil? Pen? paintbrush? broom? I don't know
2007-02-02 07:53:42 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
a broom haha
2007-02-02 07:59:23 · answer #5 · answered by marfanman00000 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ballet slippers? lol
2007-02-02 07:51:04 · answer #6 · answered by chiaroscuro 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ballet dancer
2007-02-02 08:25:07 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ballet dancer
2007-02-02 07:52:40 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
well im gonna say ballet slippers
2007-02-02 08:06:16 · answer #9 · answered by hollabacgurl136 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
paintbrush
2007-02-02 07:52:22 · answer #10 · answered by Bawls 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋