Do you use this language constructions?

Question

I mean, the ones between inverted commas:

I won't "break my promise" that I made... (in the sense of not accomplishing it).

Do you?

This is a literal translation to a Portuguese way of saying that...

Tnx!

Answer 1

"I won't break THE promise that I (have) made...."
or "I wont break my promise."

your sentence translates literally as:
"Eu não vou quebrar minha promessa que eu fiz."

We don't say that in Portuguese, it's "pleonasmo."

we would almost always say "... that I've made," but "...that I made" is not incorrect.

BTW promises are kept, not accomplished.

thus you could say also, "I will keep the promise that I've made."

Answer 2

Here are some other ways to say it also:

1. I won't fail to keep the promise that I made
2. I will keep the promise that I made.

Answer 3

I won't break the promise I made.

Answer 4

Yes, a broken promise is common in English as well.

Answer 5

I would say, "I won't break the promise I have made". ("My" would work, but I just prefer "the" for some reason.)

Answer 6

I won't break my promise.

or

I won't break the promise (that) I made.

But "my promise that I made" is redundant.