I can’t get you off my mind,
Upon my life, you have truly shined,
I’m happy that you’re in it,
For you id never omit,
Your eyes are too beautiful for words to say,
Your face is gorgeous every single day
Your beauty can make any man rhyme
Why are you so wonderful , all the time ?
good or not ?
2007-02-01 14:17:01 · 13 answers · asked by Nick723 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
not bad....
2007-02-01 14:19:56 · answer #1 · answered by pepsi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like this allloootttt, yet some thing related to the 1st 2 lines dosent look suited to me. consistent with probability the words bushy and clay-pink only come out. different than that it is awesome! advantageous interest (:
2016-09-28 07:30:50 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i wish i had a special someone like you that would write a poem like that for me! yes that is a perfect poem to tell a girrl good luck
2007-02-02 15:30:00 · answer #3 · answered by Dakida K 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
BoIi thanXZ for DA Poem... j/p
daTZ A GooD POem
KeeP iT Up
2007-02-01 14:21:32 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
good hey its very good
ive given 3 in my life and i like yours just as much as any ive writen
2007-02-01 14:24:04 · answer #5 · answered by monekysandwolves4ever 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg the girl that ur gonn give that 2 iz gonna melt :) GOOD LUCK!
2007-02-01 14:20:18 · answer #6 · answered by Christine P 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its an awesome poem.......you should give it to the girl you like and things will fall into place...best of luck
2007-02-01 14:22:45 · answer #7 · answered by Hockey gurl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good
finish it like this( if you wish)
"For to awnser take all your time
For the way you speak
means the world to me"
2007-02-01 14:23:02 · answer #8 · answered by Cupcake Flavor Soda 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it.........it came from the heart & is very sweet.
2007-02-01 14:23:20 · answer #9 · answered by earthangel_candy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is Good.
2007-02-01 14:25:16 · answer #10 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it.... so you sure you don't want to send it to me. lol
2007-02-01 14:19:48 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋