"Future into the road of excellence"
any correction/suggestion?
2007-02-01 02:26:26 · 6 answers · asked by -curbside- 4 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
It makes no sense whatsoever. What are you trying to say?
2007-02-01 03:28:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If this is supposed to be a complete sentence, there would have to be a verb; however, as a phrase, I think it sounds pretty good. I would suggest adding an article or something at the beginning, like "the", just so it doesn't sound like it's supposed to be a verb. I'd also use a bit of a less awkward preposition--it kind of hurts to actually go INTO the road. Maybe "on" or "along" would work better.
2007-02-01 18:41:12 · answer #2 · answered by GeekGirl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't think that "into" is the correct word to use here. Perhaps use "onto"......"Future onto the road of excellence" And it still does not really make any sense to me, but I am not an English major either.
2007-02-01 02:36:42 · answer #3 · answered by dragondave187 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"To the future, on the road to excellence." I THINK this is the idea you're going for...although I'm not a 100% sure on the grammar.
2007-02-01 03:37:43 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
"The future into the road of excellence" sounds better.
2007-02-01 02:36:14 · answer #5 · answered by tewarienormy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is a phrase, not a sentence because it does not have a subject and a predicate.
2007-02-01 02:34:22 · answer #6 · answered by arkiemom 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋