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Sandra was a 24 year old girl in her prime years. Once she went online to chatrooms and met this guy Leo. He was easy to talk to,and soon became good online friends with him. Somehow to her,he seemed like the perfect man and always seemed to know what was on her thoughts constantly,and often gave her mutual advice and consolations about troubles in her life. And one day,they agreed to meet. Things went well. Leo turned out to be a strikingly dashing man,and they soon went out together. Leo's constant humour and luscious presents often made Sandra feel as if she's in heaven,and soon she fell head over heels for him. After a few months,Leo presented her with a proposal ring and proposed to her. Sandra agreed and soon Leo told her that he had to go away for a period to venture for a new apartment. However,few months had passed and there was no news of him. Sandra hence went to the company which Leo worked in and to her dismay,they told her there was no such person called Leo. And she felt devastated. Leo had abandoned her. She refused to give this relationship up and searched far and wide for Leo. True enough,soon she received a call from Leo and they finally met in a café. Leo revealed a shocking fact to Sandra. This was the story. Leo’s only aim for hooking up with Sandra was to cheat her of her feelings and then abandon her to get his revenge. He had been doing the same thing to 20 women already,just to avenge his dead brother. His dead brother once had a girlfriend,and was crazily in love and devoted to her. Unexpectedly,his girlfriend ran away with another guy just because of a proposal ring,and he was so devastated that he jumped off a building and killed himself. Out of hatred for promiscuous women online,he started plotting few years ago. Sandra finally knew everything and did nothing – but walk away. She walked away from Leo,who used to be her shelter & confidante.

2007-02-01 01:31:46 · 5 answers · asked by basshunter_poka 1 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

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Good story, but too real to keep in my personal library....and depressing.

2007-02-01 01:35:38 · answer #1 · answered by statuewomanromans 4 · 1 0

I wouldn't buy it. But if you're trying to tell the story that smething like this has happened to you, well, the Leo guy is crazy. I mean devotion for a loved one is good, but I don;t think his deceased brother would like it if he took t out on so many women.

2007-02-01 01:36:34 · answer #2 · answered by dark_illumination 2 · 0 0

This is more of a story outline than a story. Flesh out the characters, give them some dialogue, and maybe it might be worth $2.50. Nice idea, though.

2007-02-01 01:35:53 · answer #3 · answered by Mr. Grudge 5 · 0 0

each and every so often I sit down alongside on or a cut back or curbside with my skinny palms tucked and my elongated palms scratching crispy stuff in my oily, yet semi-glolly strands ask your self - ing "why are Cherrios referred to as Cheerios" ? Then I flow to center line close to a truck, with vast wheels pull my tally hoo and purpose at stable- year. Cheers!

2016-12-17 07:04:57 · answer #4 · answered by roedel 3 · 0 0

hell no that story sucked

2007-02-01 01:34:33 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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