when I ask if I can tell you a secret,
What I mean is, can I trust you.
When I ask if you'll help me,
what I mean is will you be there.
When I ask what you think of me,
what i really mean, is do you see the real me.
When I ask if you can talk,
what I mean is will you listen.
When i ask if we are friends,
what I really mean is we're together til the end.
2007-01-31 18:54:00 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
It sounds great. I think you should make a free account on http://www.poemhunter.com I'm on there and I get reviews for all my poems. Try it out.
2007-02-04 18:35:21 · answer #1 · answered by √ẫηΣşşẫ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats really pretty I think. Good job!
2007-01-31 19:10:35 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes it is really nice .and u have a chance to become a poet. try it wil suceed .
2007-01-31 19:16:33 · answer #3 · answered by manju 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is so corny, and I'm so horny and your really starting to bore me. Will you listen or do you prefer ***-kissin.
2007-01-31 19:01:58 · answer #4 · answered by daboss 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice but it feels like i've read something like this before...
well just keep up the good work
2007-01-31 18:59:57 · answer #5 · answered by klao8 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice job! That really is beautiful...
2007-01-31 18:57:14 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋