My daughter just turned 17 I wrote this in regards to that
On this day 17 years ago I had the most thrilling event to be had It was the most exciting day I shared with your dad
You were so easily admired by our family and friends as well.
When Daddy first held you I saw his heart swell.
His love was apparent and instantly shared.
New roles and worries were also declared.
Your infancy went by in a flash and toddler years flew.
I’m scared if I turn my head you’ll be out of view
I used to fuss about you wearing shoes when you’d go play.
I couldn’t wait to hear your stories at the end of the day
Those things seem silly when I reflect on the past
The rest of tomorrow I hope is not as fast.
It’s all so different now that I am this age that my parents were seems like Just the other day
Your future is Right now please make certain you don’t piss it away
Thats it thanks for reading it.
2007-01-31 16:14:23 · 4 answers · asked by unbeatensnailhere 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
okay I changed the line to "Wish"
2007-02-03 09:00:30 · update #1
i think that is fantastic you are truly a loving caring parent please allow me to commend you on your love and concern for your child
2007-02-06 10:09:54 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is absolutely beautiful except for the very last line it needs to end on a positive note.
2007-02-01 12:48:05 · answer #2 · answered by wildpalomino 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think that is swweeeeeeeet..................i hope u can enjoy the life and the time u spent with ur daughter.
2007-02-06 18:02:50 · answer #3 · answered by eva erawaty henry 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it its sweet i just wish you hadn't put 'please don't piss it away' otherwise its really really sweet!
2007-02-01 03:48:58 · answer #4 · answered by gracie92 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋