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Ok i have a health project 2 do for advertising tatcitcs rite and are teacher asigned us partners so we have 2 make a commerical with your own prouduct and u present it to your class like an commerical riteme and my friend chose 2 make a petshop like out of a big box and sell animals (stuff animals) and im bring in my rea puppy but any wayz and pestore is called B.K animals anywayz i need some iseads and pics of how i should like sart the pet shop like im going 2 take a big box and make it ito a pet shop any ideas plz help :) thx websites ur suggestions pics anything is good ohh yea and im in grade 6 :) :) thx

2007-01-31 11:09:26 · 11 answers · asked by Diamond P 2 in Pets Dogs

11 answers

I would suggest that you drop this class and take an ENGLISH class,,

2007-01-31 11:15:13 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 8 2

the situation as I understand it is that you have an assignment to start your own business and treat it as if it were a real business. And you have another person to work with. It that right so far? You would like some ideas about what to put into your pet shop. First, FORGET bringing your puppy to class. It will get in the way of your doing your project for the class and GETTING A GOOD GRADE. That is the goal. Do whatever it takes to get an A.
People spend millions on pet products every year, so you have chosen well. Go to a pet store with a notebook and write down things you might be able to use. Most pet stores sell tons of supplies for various animals, but rarely sell animals, except fish. Decorate your box so that it looks nice. and here are two websites that will be helpful. AKC.com (American Kennel Club...dogs), and petco.com. (big chain of pet stores) . You will see what they sell and how they sell it. This could lead to other links to follow. Be sure you do this with your buddy, so you both know what you are doing.
Good luck. And as for your English--get a tutor. You will not be able to do work in higher grades if you can't read and write correctly.

2007-01-31 11:53:16 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

That is a great project! But first, start writing (and talking) so people don't have to translate what you're saying. People won't want your product if they don't know what it is.

Since you are 'selling' pets, choose a name that will say what you're selling. Choose something that is cool, something that will make people want to come in.

Some of the most effective commercials I've ever seen featured talking animals. I'm not sure if you can pull that off or not, but it's something to think about. In any case, you will want to talk about your animals and about how they would be good pets. Show them so people will want them.

Good luck!

2007-01-31 11:25:18 · answer #3 · answered by Tigger 7 · 2 0

Your paragraph looks like one big run-on sentence. Your grammar is like a 2-year-old's. People shouldn't have to decipher all that mess to try and comprehend what you're trying to say. Since you're in the 6th grade, you should know how to spell by now and properly use punctuation. Have your parents rewrite your paragraph, and post it again.

2007-01-31 11:16:04 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 5 0

That sounds like so cool. lol. (Don't slam on her English too much, its the 6th grade thing!! You all know you talked like that in your time too!)

Check out the Littlest Pet Shop line of kids toys. Might give you a place to start.

2007-01-31 11:21:41 · answer #5 · answered by D Marie 3 · 0 1

You are in serious trouble child if you ever have to get a job or survive in the real world. Your English and grammar are horrible. Your English teacher should be fired and never allowed to teach again.

2007-01-31 11:18:33 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 5 0

Wow, sounds really cool. I would go to www.google.com and seach for animal store pics. Im sure you can get some cool ideas from that.
Hope this helps! :)

2007-01-31 11:14:59 · answer #7 · answered by iloveyou<3 2 · 1 0

I think you need to go back to English class.

2007-01-31 11:21:20 · answer #8 · answered by Bindi *dogtrainingbyjess.com* 7 · 2 0

Its called spell check look into it.
I cannot understand a word you have typed maybe that is why you got no answers last time

2007-01-31 11:17:35 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 4 1

Focus on grammar and spelling!

2007-01-31 11:24:40 · answer #10 · answered by riobob00 3 · 1 0

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