this is my young sister's new story.please give her ur opnion,we are egyption...thnks?

Question

No one heard about the 2 teenagers who disappeared in that jungle. They were walking, then they couldn't find their way back …They couldn't
See any animals. After little time they found a house
It wasn’t old and a Very beautiful woman opened the door .his friend couldn’t move his Eyes from her .

Days after days moved on. He saw the woman and his friend in the room. They were too close, and his friend closed his eyes. suddenly She stitched up her fingers in his face and pluck it out .and began 2 eat it
He screamed very loud and ran very quickly he ran and ran and ran
When he looked behind him he knew that she would catch him. He saw a black cat which was transformed into that woman .he screamed

"Thank god it was only a nightmare but why he can't feel his body ?", so he thought. little did he know he was in a in her stomach

Answer 1

scary

Answer 2

Wow..that's pretty freaky and I mean it in a good way...It begins as like Hansel and Grettle, but different enough to be unique...then it seems a bit like Little Red Riding hood but again different enough to be unique.

One could make the argument that she has read both tales and incorperated them together to make a new tale. One could draw the similarities, but these are traditional plots in childrens scarey tails...

It has it's own kind of very freaky touch that is adult...I guess my question is, is you sisiter ok?

Answer 3

I would say she needs to be careful of what she eats before she goes to bed. Strange food can produce strange dreams.....that mean nothing at all.


Being Egyptian or not, people are people and they have weird dreams.

Answer 4

Well that was creative it sounds like a witch story.

Answer 5

YOU MEAN YOU PEOPLE ARE ACTUALLY ANALYING THIOS AND TRYING TO ANSWER THIS?