2007-01-30 10:53:48 · 12 answers · asked by Ozzy G 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Roses are red,
Sometimes they're pink,
I really, really love you,
But, whoa girl, you STINK!
Seriously, don't use that.
Write it yourself, but if you have trouble, I suggest you try Shakespearean poetry, it worked for me...
2007-01-30 11:00:04 · answer #1 · answered by Rich 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Roses are red
Violents are blue,
Your boyfriend can't write poetry
So he asked me to do one for you
Lying still in the night
My head on your chest listening to the beat,
The love we share is oh so beautiful
And you're my precious little sweet
When I feel your touch
My body starts to tremble,
But please don't stop
I'm afraid I won't remember
You're the angel in my eye
And I don't know how long this love will last,
But at least I'll feel good
Knowing you were once a part of my past
-E.N.G.(Me)
2007-01-30 19:11:48 · answer #2 · answered by ♥♪MissSoprano♫♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why not sing her a song from someone old school, like Elvis or The Beatles. You can melt her heart that way and not use someone elses creativity. Remember, the most important thing in a relationship is honesty.
2007-01-30 19:00:49 · answer #3 · answered by Honeypai 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your poem should be from the heart. you shouldnt have to get online and ask a bunch of folksto write a poem for your girl. if she knew she probably would have dumped you
2007-01-30 18:59:25 · answer #4 · answered by keepin it reel 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
NO if you are gonna give a poem to your girlfriend it needs to come from yourself. If you really cared about her you would take the time to do it yourself! If i was her and i found out you gave me a poem that you didnt even write that you said you did i would dump you cause thats rude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!So you need to think about that~~!~!!!!
2007-01-30 18:59:33 · answer #5 · answered by smart brunette 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Being with you is like a miracle that comes only once in a lifetime.
2007-01-30 19:02:09 · answer #6 · answered by Cecilia ♡ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No, that needs to come from you. I don't know wht you feel for her, so I'm sorry I can't help. It comes from the heart, dear...just start writing, it'll come!
2007-01-30 19:05:00 · answer #7 · answered by ☼ Latina Loca loves Yayo ☼ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I want to make you smile a lot
I hope you'll be impressed
I picture you both day and night
Usually undressed.
Rhymes are something I don't do
I hope this isn't lame
The guy who wrote this said it sucks
He doesn't know your name.
2007-01-30 19:00:17 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Love is like a river that flows, it never stops. Our love shall never stop for as long as i see you every day and i will keep on loving you.
2007-01-30 18:57:51 · answer #9 · answered by Kelse 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ur peom should be from ur heart but here's one
a real love is a rare rose i found my real rose and it's u i love u this much look around i love u farther than the eye can see more than the deepest ocean i love you with all me heart and i hope that you do to
not really peotic but idk
2007-01-30 19:05:50 · answer #10 · answered by ashley19948 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋