Wash Your Hands
Wash your hands said the sign
That hung on the restroom door
But I was in a hurry
And ignored the warning that it told
I ate breakfast, then lunch, and dinner
My mouth felt really strange
And when I went to wash it out
The toothpaste really stung
My gums did ooze a nasty puss
Then all my teeth fell out
I tried to scream but my vocal cords
Simply refused to shout
I went to the doctor
And the doctor said
"I hope you learned your lesson
Cause it sure is nasty to have a germ infestation"
He gave me some antibiotics
It took a year to heal
And to think I could of avoided it all
If I would of took the time
Just to wash my hands
2007-01-29 21:28:14 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
It makes a good point, and while a poem dosnt always have to rhyme, it lacks a certain rhythm. If you developed it a bit more and maybe altered certain lines, it could flow a bit nicer. good luck!
2007-01-29 22:19:25 · answer #1 · answered by Aviana L 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its funny - made me laugh expecially the parts when it says that all ur teeth fell out etc, well then Mister - hope u have learned ur lesson for that day (cant say today cos not sure if it happened today or not)
2007-01-29 21:43:54 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ouch!!! thats painful & the message is clear.. thanx
p.s. i'll never avoid washing my hands again.. lol
2007-01-29 21:37:12 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its really creative. I think you could go somewhere with this keep up the good work.
2007-01-29 21:39:21 · answer #4 · answered by Richbitch 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i find it pretty cute and amusing.
when you write poems, think of nothing else but the message you want to relay to the people who will read your poems.
your poem has a really clear message.
that's a good start!
keep on writing more poems...!
good luck!
2007-01-29 21:38:56 · answer #5 · answered by marie colleen 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
soz
but that one is just weird
2007-01-29 21:36:42 · answer #6 · answered by ngbreeca 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ammmm NO!!!!
2007-01-29 21:31:35 · answer #7 · answered by revolution 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋