you are sweeter than sugar hotter than fire but luving you is my only desire
2007-01-29 08:41:39
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answered by SexyMami 2
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ok here is what I think you should add on to it.....Roses are red,Violets are blue,you are fine and I love you,you are so sweet,sweeter then candy,and you are very dandy. That is all I can think off. SORRY and GOOD LUCK!
2007-01-29 08:41:49
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answered by Caitlyn C 2
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First of all, you spelt 'violets' wrong. Second, the whole "roses are red violets are blue" thing is kinda lame. But girls DO love poems.... Poems don't have to rhyme either. Just put together imagery that will make her go all romantic on you, and you'll do just fine.
2007-01-29 08:45:31
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answered by Anonymous
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Roses are red,violets are blue,
u r fine and i love u.
You r so sweet, sweeter than sugur,
You r so hot , hotter than fire,
wich makes u wanna be my only desire.
I love u, and u love me back MORE,
which is why when i see u ...u make my heart soar.
Good luck...hope that helps!!
2007-01-29 08:50:40
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answered by brit_09 1
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Roses r red
violets r blue
this will always be true:
the fact that i love u.
Sweeter than sugar
Hotter than flames
my world used to be hazy
but thanks to you, now my world is crazy!(for you)
Thats what you should write. Add in the paranthesis.
2007-01-29 08:57:16
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answered by STrawberry 3
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
You are fine the way you are,
you are my shining star.
My shining star brightly above,
I will never leave you,
I will always love you,
Stay with me for you are my true love.
2007-01-29 08:43:41
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answered by momof3 5
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Violets spelling check sweetie. But nice poem so far.
2007-01-29 08:41:42
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answered by Anonymous
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When you're around I feel all fine and dandy.
2007-01-29 08:40:48
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answered by ehrlich 6
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You make me feel oh so dandy! You like? It rhymes!
2007-01-29 08:41:28
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answered by eli 2
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when we're together u make me want to be handy :)
2007-01-29 08:44:10
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answered by mrs_pipesmoker 7
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