I am a Japanee and made the following English question to my class. Will you correct it into better English? Thank you.
Who can guess how misfortunate Tama (a girl's name) was when she got to be traitor's daughter?
How do you solve your problem when you are in such a misfortune, difficulty, distress or predicament?
2007-01-29 07:25:09 · 8 answers · asked by Taro K 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
Who can guess how unfortunate a position Tama found herself in when she discovered she was a traitor's daughter?
How do you solve your problem when you are in such an unfortunate, difficult, distressing predicament?
2007-01-29 16:31:14 · answer #1 · answered by ichliebekira 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Who can guess how misfortunate Tama (a girl's name) was when she got to be traitor's daughter?
How do you solve your problem when you are in such a misfortune, difficulty, distress or predicament?
Who can guess how unfortunate Tama was when she became a traitor's daughter?
How do you solve this problem when you are having so much misfortune, difficulty, distress and are in such a predicament.
Hope this helps =)
2007-01-29 07:33:17 · answer #2 · answered by Vulcan Chic 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Who can venture a guess as to how unfortunate Tama felt to be the daughter of a traitor? How do you solve your problem when you face such difficulty,misfortune,ands stress because of this predicament?
2007-01-29 07:32:42 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Japanese.
Why was it unfortunate for Tama to be a traitor's daughter?
How do you deal with misfortune, difficulty, distress?
2007-01-29 07:35:06 · answer #4 · answered by lcraesharbor 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Who can guess Tamas misfortune when she became the traitors daughter?
2007-01-29 07:33:53 · answer #5 · answered by shorty 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You just cannot realise the problems and misfortune that befell Tama, when she learned that she was the daughter of a traitor, there seemed to be no solution to her dilemma.
2007-01-29 07:32:56 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
What challenges did Tama face after she became Traitor's daughter? How do you deal with such challenges?
or:
"What challenges have yu faced in your life and how have you dealt with them?
Hope that this helps.
2007-01-29 07:36:41 · answer #7 · answered by JAN W 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very good! very few differences... The AAA Boys' Choir, it is composed one hundred eighty boys elderly from 10 to 26, performed a joint live performance with Hakusan JHS scholars. For this excursion, there have been 31 new boys interior the yankee team. They sang ' Sen no kaze ni natte' in jap as an encore song. The Choir, which became prepared in 1990 in BBBB, stayed in Tokyo and our city for 2 weeks. I moved the sentences round to assist your ideas bypass somewhat better. It sounds better in English to no longer say "The Choir" over and once more desirable, extraordinarily on the start of each and every sentence, so I used "American team" on the end of one sentence quite. i'm assuming they were people. If no longer, better replace that to at least some thing else.
2016-10-16 06:34:42 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋