She dumped me
I loved her
I missed her
But she dumped me
I cared for her
I changed for her
But she dumped me
I dreamed about her
I thought about her
But she dumped me
I prayed for her
I stayed up for her
But she dumped me
I smiled for her
I cried for her
But she dumped me
I lived for her
I was ready to die for her
But she dumped me
I joked with her
If laughed with her
But she dumped me
I flirted with her
I left every one for her
But she dumped me
Maybe I was not good enough for her
Maybe she found some one better for her
Coz she dumped me
Maybe it was god’s wish
Maybe it was fate
Coz she dumped me
I still love her
I still miss her
I still care for her
2007-01-29 05:53:04 · 18 answers · asked by Angad 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Sounds like you gave someone all that you had and they didn't return the love. Take this experience with you, and donot become bitter just wiser . I rate this poem a 10.
2007-01-29 06:02:54 · answer #1 · answered by DKNY 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wonderful she deserves you
A NEW YEAR ADDED 2007
Time has just one purpose,
Simply to add on, and on, a bale of Time.
Life has just one purpose,
To go on, and on, and on.
Living beings must have a goal,
"Add on knowledge and be bold."
Around the world in 2006
I experienced people’s thoughts,
So centrally linked, with the rest,
Except that the West is more pragmatic,
But more animalistic.
The East is still more mythical and really holistic.
Yet each year adds a world of experience.
So 2007 be welcomed just as another addition.
COLLS WISHES HIS EVERLASTING WELLWISHERS.
A HAPPY New Year 2007 AGAIN.
COLLS
01JANUARY2007
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2007-01-29 14:05:11 · answer #2 · answered by KOHLI V 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is a very nice poem. feelings from the heart, way to go, and best of luck.
on a scale of 10 i surely give you a 10
2007-01-29 14:01:24 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it... I'd have to give it and A or an A-. do you write often? Oh, I'm sorry she dumped you.
2007-01-29 13:58:06 · answer #4 · answered by happyblonde 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
B- you have spelling errors too...and she still dumped you. coz is not an acceptable form, come on, I thought they decided not to teach ebonics in school??
And dude, move on!
2007-01-29 14:02:17 · answer #5 · answered by WifeandMom 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
How old are you? Sounds like a cheap immitation of a sappy country song. I almost killed myself!
2007-01-29 13:57:48 · answer #6 · answered by georgiarose_01 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
speaking of dumped, now I've got to go take one after reading that crap.
2007-01-29 14:00:51 · answer #7 · answered by SEAHAWK 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
B+, I guess it was sanged by Derek Warnock.
2007-01-29 14:01:08 · answer #8 · answered by Redhead Kicki 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
C+
2007-01-29 13:59:10 · answer #9 · answered by AngieBaby 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi,
Nice one but perhaps overcooked.
2007-01-29 13:57:58 · answer #10 · answered by yakatang 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋