can you correct this story, please?

Question

For how much Lulu loved her parents she couldn’t stand the fact who her mother forbad her to see that boy that a lot appealed to her but he had some problems with the law.
Therefore a night, after the umpteenth row with the mother, she told her boy-friend to ask him to came her to take.
In fact she couldn’t stand more to be treating like a child and to be accused to make chosen very bad and unripe above all about that boy.
After that she had written a letter to her mother, where she explained the reasons of her choice, she took the money-box and got down from the window avoiding waking up the young brother who was sleeping in the next room.
To escape from the gate, she waited for boy who punctual presented himself in front of house and to get in car, she greeted what it was her nest of infancy for seventeen years.

Answer 1

Lulu loved her parents very much but she couldn't stand the fact that her mother forbade her from seeing a boy she was attracted to. A boy who had been in trouble with the law.

She constantly rowed with her mother so decided to organise to run away with the boy. She was tired of being treated like a child of being told who she could be with and how young she was. She was not a child anymore!

Leaving a letter to her mother, where she explained the reasons why she was leaving, she took the money box and climbed out of her window. Her young brother was sleeping next door so she tried very hard to keep quiet.

Nervously she waited near the gate where her boyfriend would be soon. He would be here soon in his car to take her away from the place that she had known as her home and her whole life for 17 years.

Answer 2

I copied and pasted you story and made the corretions- you may copy and paste the corrected and print it out

For how much Lulu loved her parents, she couldn’t stand the fact that her mother forbad her to see that boy that appealed to her a lot, but he had some problems with the law.
Therefore a night, after the umpteenth row with the mother, she called her boyfriend to ask him to came her to take.
In fact she couldn’t stand more to be treating like a child and to be accused to make chosen very bad and unripe above all about that boy.
After that she had written a letter to her mother, where she explained the reasons of her choice, she took the money-box and got down from the window avoiding waking up the young brother who was sleeping in the next room.
To escape from the gate, she waited for boy who punctual presented himself in front of house and to get in car, she greeted what it was her nest of infancy for seventeen years.

Answer 3

When they arrived at the truck stop he told her that they still didnt have enough money to start their new life.
So even though he knew it would hurt her he sold some time with her to a big bruiser of a trucker.
She was shattered by the whole experience if only she could take back the last 12 hours. Mom was right.

Answer 4

Sorry I Can't But It Looks Pretty Good To Me.

Answer 5

Sara rewrite will you then I'll know what the hell your on about right now the more i read it i get more confused

Answer 6

Fix it yourself, I take it your not English or American because your Story makes sense but your words do not. Fix it first then I'll take a look at it.

Answer 7

sorry can't follow the english.

I'm sure this is about you,..so yes to whatever your decision,...

Answer 8

correct it yourself, repost it, then have someone check over your mistakes. i ain't doing your homework.

Answer 9

no i haven't got a clue what you are talking about

Answer 10

sori iv not spoke proper england since i waz a children!!!!!!!!!