Is the term "business world" appropriate in this sentence?

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Is the term "business world" appropriate in this sentence?

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The program for the development of OSS in Banda Aceh is one of the manifestations of USAID commitment to help Aceh’s economy by creating conducive business climate for business world by simplifying the licensing for *business world*.

2007-01-28 05:43:10 · 2 answers · asked by answermeplease 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages

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'...USAID's commitment to help Aceh’s economy by creating a conducive business climate for their economy by simplifying the licensing for aspiring entrepreneurs.

2007-01-28 05:51:05 · answer #1 · answered by Divine_10 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋

You should start over.

2007-01-28 05:48:24 · answer #2 · answered by Smurfetta 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋