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Together but Apart
Five years ago,
She lied to you.
Told you I was fake.
But when I tried to talk to you,
You'd run off down the street.

It broke my heart to see you leave,
and not call down the road.
'Cause thats what your s'posed to do.
I felt so much alone.

When I found out that you had moved,
I thought my world would end.
For even though, Through all of that,
I longed to be your friend.

I still love you so, so much,
from the bottem of my heart.
And I still feel like we're together.
Even though we're apart.

2007-01-28 05:29:44 · 3 answers · asked by Courtney 2 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

3 answers

im a guy and i enjoy poetry. and i enjoyed yours. it speaks of pain and love lost which echoes in too many hearts. i hope to see more of your work and i might even share some of mine some day.

2007-01-28 05:45:01 · answer #1 · answered by evil Hesh 6 · 0 0

I luv the peom but if you gave it to a guy he prodely wounldn't think that much of it because that is how guys are!!I I hate that about them!

2007-01-28 13:35:14 · answer #2 · answered by Brittany Lowe 1 · 0 0

I like your poem and I also like to write poem's I would be flattered if a girl put her feelings in to a poem for me. : )

2007-01-28 13:48:38 · answer #3 · answered by jimmy_g01 2 · 0 0

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