How do you like this work of mine? It's to and for my bf, Jimmy.
Baby, I Love You,
Forever More.
You are my one and only,
For whom I adore.
Some people might call this a sappy love,
But they must not appreciate,
What's from up above.
Love is in the air,
Like the wind in my hair.
And yet I see this little frog,
Sitting in a chair.
He's missing his stomach,
(thanks to us!)
We unlocked his heart,
With our love!
Baby, I Love You,
You know it's true.
I wanna kiss and hug you,
At least once.
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2007-01-27 13:14:06 · 8 answers · asked by tren 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
i like it but not sure about the frog part ? he is missing his stomach ? gl to you
2007-01-27 13:19:37 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't understand the frog thing there after wind in my hair inside joke maybe? I'd put something like ....Like the wind in my hair. I get chills from your stare. I wanna kiss you when your near. well something like that : ) other then that I think it's cool I like to write poetry.
2007-01-27 21:28:14 · answer #2 · answered by jimmy_g01 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
aww thats cute i like the frog part lol kinda weird
lovee
2007-01-27 21:21:36 · answer #3 · answered by erin♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yea
2007-01-27 21:17:49 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the frog part is pretty cheesy, but the rest is ok, i guess!
good luck!
2007-01-27 21:19:50 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow that's really good you have a real talent!
2007-01-27 21:20:22 · answer #6 · answered by seasons.change.but.people.dont 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats very sweet i like it
2007-01-27 21:18:20 · answer #7 · answered by animallover 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
NICE, I LIKE IT
2007-01-27 21:21:41 · answer #8 · answered by babyboo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋