As I cut deeper into my wrists, the blood slowly and methodically trickling down to my fingertips, dripping onto the note i had left behind for my loved ones to read after they found me. The thickness of the dropplets grew to the size of a crocodile's tear and grew more crimson with each passing momment smearing the words on the note. No one will understand why i gave up, i dont even understand it, my life was realitively perfect to the outsiders, people that cant think or hear the my thoughts or feel the emotions that i do. If you just would've listened to what i had to say instead of pushing me away like all the others before you, then maybe you could've saved me. But now its too late, i hope you realize what you've done, this is your fault i wouldnt have turned out this way if you just made time for me in your busy schedule. i stand in the shadows of my intense feelings i had once before, this deed i've done irreversable i need to cut deeper now so i can let out all of my saddness a
2007-01-27 10:22:55 · 6 answers · asked by As she sees me I AM A GOD! 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
(continued) and sorrow escape from what's left of my heart, the part you didn't destroy. my blood's glowing a different shade of crimson, now i can finaly see the end is near. This is my final good-bye, it maybe a little cliche but oh well; Good-bye Cruel World!
2007-01-27 10:26:08 · update #1
This is just a figurative thing. I DONT plan on KILLING myself SO don't LECTURE ME!
2007-01-27 10:51:05 · update #2
baby, i wish you knew how amazing of a writer you are. and that i was noticing when i re read this amazing piece that I'm am so happy i saved you from this sorrow you drenched out without me there to hold you from your woe. and to compliment your genius, your description is deep enough to cut the readers wrist. and i love how i picture a person laying down in the mood where anger and loss leaves them numb with pain just watching there blood as well as their life fall fall to the ground as if they were watching a summer thunder storm. its amazing my angel.. dont ever stop writting. know you Will go some where with this
2007-01-27 17:02:02 · answer #1 · answered by the sulky 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well now, #1 you have not said how old you are.If you are seriously considering suicide just so you know it is the COWARDS way out. If you are trying to make your parents feel guilty and sorry for you then YOU need to GROW Up. unbeliveable how something small as this happens and people want to do away with their lives when there are so many REALLY deathly ILL kids/adults FIGHTING TO make it thru the day. If you continue to cut deeper into your wrist so the blood slowly and methodically runs wherever then you surly are not wanting to let go .
2007-01-27 18:43:16 · answer #2 · answered by nickle 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I absolutly love it im a proud cutter and that poem is amazing
2007-01-27 19:52:17 · answer #3 · answered by bekah_2009 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i hope your just a writer. it would make a great story. thats one reason to live
2007-01-27 18:31:00 · answer #4 · answered by Skyy00 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i don't like long story
2007-01-27 18:27:54 · answer #5 · answered by reno 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
love it!!!!
2007-01-27 18:39:08 · answer #6 · answered by princess-of-somany 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋