guys please help?

Question

if you were in a youth development center on V-day and your girl sent you this (or guy i guess) would you like it? I have been thinking of something sweet to do since we can't see each other. I was thinking a poem a nice card and a new picture. so i wrote this.He asked me to marry him before he got sent there and will be out in 6-15 months. He sent his mom a letter this week telling her that he really loved me and when he got out was going to make things right. We have been together for 2 years. I just can't see him right now cause he is so far away.

All Iever wanted was to be part of your heart,And for us to be together, to never be apart.No one else in the world can even compare,You're perfect and so is this love that we share.
We have so much more than I ever thought we would,I love you more than I ever thought I could.I promise to give you all I have to give,I'll do anything for you as long as I live.In your eyes I see our present, our future and past,

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By the way you look at me I know we will last.I hope that one day you'll come to realize,How perfect you are when seen thru my eyes.I dream of your touch while you are away,I dream of your smile all through the day,
I remember the day,You came into my life,
I dream of the day I will be your wife.I dream of the day I can fall asleep next to you,I dream of the day I can say I do.
To be your wife,To be together for life,Is a dream I have,Every night.You will feel my love when we are apart When you're not here to share my days and nights
My life is so incomplete
For you are my heart, my soul
The ‘oneness’ I had known to seek

Without you I merely exist from day to day
With you I know that I will find
All that I have been searching for
My completeness, my eternal peace of mind

You are the keeper of my dreams
The man who holds my heart in his hands
The one I want to spend my life with
The one with whom I will always stand

Stand beside through thick and thin

Through all that life will throw our way
Knowing that this special love we share
Will guide us, each and every day

This journey was started long ago
Before this time and place
The journey of completeness
As two hearts and souls embrace

Forever is what I want with you
For the search is at an end
Our hearts have found each other
As lovers, as soul-mates, as friends.

(granted i know you are thinking why are you wasting your life with this guy.***and wondering why he's there*** I don't love him for his record or felonies i love him for what is in his heart, which people tend to look past and judge him for what he has done. that's wrong nobody is better than anybody. Money or no money nice house nice car or no nice house or nice car EVERYONE deserves somebody and somebody that will love them at that).

Answer 1

Ahhh to be in love! Yeah, sure send it.

Answer 2

thats a great poem. it shows u truly meaqn alot and u have deep feelings for him. he's a lucky man to be with u. good luck

Answer 3

that is a beautiful poem, its relaly deep and im sure would mean a lot to him if u and him are as close as it seems :)