What does love deserve…?
A big DREAM wedding with the bride dressed up as if she were a geisha (and perhaps is)? Well of course the first few periods of love, so precious and infantile, should be given its kick to maturity by a large love honoring wedding…. Right?
Wouldn’t a small personal exchange of vows be perfect for love, this blind ultra-forgiving, un-materialistic felling? This could be the perfect stepping stone for a long life of passion and friendship, Or at least a few years of happiness.
Does love even deserve anything?
Can’t it thrive on its self with out even a breath of FRESH air? Like how a mother loves her child even before it is born for no statistical reason, just because love is.
Who even would give everything to love.…? I mean it’s just a feeling.
Ill tell you who__ the exact person that kisses away my wrong, and tells me I am perfect and have the strength to do any thing. This is the person that has dedicated their life to love... to their love…… me!!!
2007-01-27 03:41:25 · 11 answers · asked by the sulky 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
to those who say this is not a poem,
its freeverse.. get open minded.
2007-01-27 04:08:53 · update #1
Sounds prosie.
Additions: I love Josh--try publishing it in a poetry magazine and then come back to YA and tell us the many hundreds of offers you've received. Better yet, I'll present your "poem" to my professor to see what she and the panel think of it.
Best of luck...
2007-01-27 03:56:47 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I undertaking - it has lengthy gone into hiding - frequently, many times restoring its` power; abiding with us to create little fuss til the on the spot`s previous a fright Then..write, write write! (i became so even as my dada nonetheless lived - for a tyrant`s carry he spread all round me - yet no longer so binding because the regulations in my heart that were practised at murmering, `It`ll bypass.. enable him be.`). Sending you a heart-hotter..and assorted hugg - a neat poem right here Beth .. TY i imagine you in many cases communicate words some thing uf us won't be able to locate.
2016-10-16 04:26:51 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Love It
2007-01-27 03:47:09 · answer #3 · answered by Time@ Time 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW!!!!! I really like this. I write poems myself, but I can honestly say that I have never written anything that deep before. This is a very, very good poem.
2007-01-27 03:49:19 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a good poem like the words but i cant seem to find the rythm to the poem and weve been learneing about that in school it would be better if you found a good rythm 4 it but other wise its beautiful and good luck!
2007-01-27 03:47:15 · answer #5 · answered by juggalette 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice* now go to www.lovingyou.com and add that so others can view your poem as well.
It is your feelings/inner thoughts/perception and very well put*
keep on writing*~
2007-01-27 03:47:31 · answer #6 · answered by friskymisty01 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love your poem its very good,
but obsessing over this josh very well could,
leave you and your poem to mop up your tears,
as rushing into relationships opens mens fears,
take your boyfriend slow, then you and me will know,
that your relationship and poems will onistly grow and flow
:)
2007-01-27 08:49:25 · answer #7 · answered by JT 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's well described but's it's not really like a poem.
2007-01-27 04:03:13 · answer #8 · answered by Nocturne 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'm sorry. i just don't understand it. keep trying, though.
2007-01-27 03:46:21 · answer #9 · answered by ♥2cute4u♥ 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its cool...
2007-01-27 03:48:28 · answer #10 · answered by bette69 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋