Hi I am learning English. Is this correct?

Question

Last night I couldn’t sleep. I had a nightmare.
In my dream I was falling to precipice and I flew.
The problem in my dream was that I couldn’t to find
Where I will to arrive and this was exasperating for me.
I thought in my dream this is only a dream but I couldn’t awake.
After that the awakener sounds and I awoke.
It was a nice moment for me.

Answer 1

You are doing a WONDERFUL job at learning English!! Small details are a little off, as falling "off" precipice, not "to."The next sentence would sound less awkward if simply "I was exasperated because I didn't know where I was supposed to go." (You had already established that you were in a dream) The next sentence sounds pretty good, except you should use the word "wake" instead of "awake." Next sentence should have been "Then the alarm rang and I awoke (or even"I woke up.") The last sentence is PERFECT!!!! GOOD JOB!!

Answer 2

Last night I couldn’t sleep. I had a nightmare.
In my dream I was falling to precipice and I flew.
The problem in my dream was that I couldn’t to find
Where I will to arrive and this was exasperating for me.
I thought in my dream this is only a dream but I couldn’t awake.
After that the awakener sounds and I awoke.
It was a nice moment for me.

Last night I couldn’t sleep and when I did, I had a nightmare.
In my dream I was falling from a precipice and I began to fly.
In my dream, I couldn’t find a place to land and I was exasperated.
I was realizing in my dream that it was a dream but I still could not awaken.
Soon the alarm woke me up. What a relief.

Answer 3

Last night I couldn’t sleep. WHEN I DID FALL ASLEEP I had a nightmare. In my dream I was falling OVER A precipice and THEN I flew. The problem in my dream was that I couldn’t FIGURE OUT WHERE I WAS GOING and this was exasperating for me.
I thought in my dream this is only a dream but I couldn’t wake UP.
After that SOUNDS WOKE ME UP. It was a nice moment for me.

Answer 4

last night I couldn't sleep. I had a nightmare. In my dream I was falling from a precipice and I flew. The problem in my dream was that I couldn't figure out where I would arrive. This was exasperating for me. I thought in my dream--this is only a dream--but I couldn't awaken. After that the alarm sounds and I awoke. It was a nice moment for me.

Answer 5

You have to go to sleep to dream otherwise you are hallucinating.
You were falling into a precipice.
The problem in you dream was that you didn't know where you were going.
You couldn't awaken.
After the alarm sounded,You awakened.

Answer 6

The problem in my dream was that I couldn’t to find

should be

The problem in my dream is that I couldn't wake up.

Answer 7

properly, the first step must be interpreting of comics, Tintin, to illustrate (regardless of the actuality that those books are initially written in French, yet Leslie Lonsdale Cooper and Michael Turner have rendered them excellently in English). right here, the speech is followed through pictures, and the lanugage is colloquial. From that you'll step through step graduate to Enid Blyton (inspite of your age), Hardy Boys, Nancy Drew and from them on to such stalwarts as Forsyth, Follett, Somerset Maugham and Dickens. each and every of the even as, both Oxford greater rookies' Dictionary OR Longman's Dictionary of contemporary English must be your significant other. do not forget that your command over any language relies upon upon 2 factors - one is what number words in that language you recognize, and the second one is even if you recognize the way, the position and fewer than what situations to apply those words. i do not recognize if that is the least complicated way or no longer it is per chance the perfect way available. it is been for me, besides.

Answer 8

You couldn't sleep, and you couldn't wake up? That's not possible. If you can't sleep, you can't be having a nightmare.


"After that the awakener sounds and I awoke" - you might say "the awakener sounded."

Answer 9

after the modal verbs like can/could,shall/should,may,might ,always use the simple verb without (to) or(ing).instead of where i will i think it's better to say where i tend to arrive.i could'nt awake is not right u have to say i could'nt wake up or i wasn't able to wake up

Answer 10

the problem with my dream is the i dream too much.