Should this have a comma in between or not?
Imagine a human willing to die, so his surroundings would have something to eat.
or
Imagine a human willing to die so his surroundings would have something to eat.
2007-01-26 04:08:26 · 7 answers · asked by blue_bee 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Imagine a human willing to die so that his surroundings would have something to eat.
Imagine a human willing to sacrifice his life, to feed his surroundings.
Imagine a human sacrificing his life so that his surroundings would have something to eat.
Imagine a human willing to die to nourish his surroundings.
2007-01-26 04:21:29 · answer #1 · answered by Little Jeannie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no comma. A comma divides 2 thoughts or more than one prepositional phrase. Though the sentence is grammatically incorrect-since 'surroundings' do not eat.
2007-01-26 12:27:57 · answer #2 · answered by jersey girl 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I say no comma. Everything in the second half is describing (modifying) the word die.
2007-01-26 12:20:38 · answer #3 · answered by JordanB 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No comma.
If you add a comma, it will cause a break between the two clauses and it sounds awkward.
2007-01-26 12:16:16 · answer #4 · answered by Alisa 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i say 2
2007-01-26 12:13:20 · answer #5 · answered by ? 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i say the first one, it creates a pause, giving the statement more drama
2007-01-26 12:18:51 · answer #6 · answered by ♠ Merlin ♠ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It depends on what you mean.
2007-01-26 12:13:21 · answer #7 · answered by professionaleccentric 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋