As I sit here in dispair
With razors running thru my hair
Wondering how I will look
I want to look, just like the book
First she lifts me up and down
Then she spins me round and round
Now she tells me she's all done
But why did all the women run
Then she says she missed a spot
Oh my god, she did not
Where is all the hair I had
Oh she says, you'll be glad
Girls will see you from afar
Even at your favorite bar
They will think that you are kewl
Some of them will even drool
So I'll go there really fast
Making sure the jell does last
Get a seat out in the back
Put my coat upon a rack
First I'll offer one a drink
Or maybe try a suttle wink
There ones turned around to look
Oh my god I need to book
Sure are ugly women here
But they do look good with beer
Guess this wasnt my best night
Cause all I got, was just a fight
2007-01-25 21:36:40 · 11 answers · asked by gary_b04901 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
jesus I'd give that a 1.
stick to your day job.
2007-01-25 21:41:48 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
this might properly be a great poem. i like it. It holds heartrending reality in it. I supply it a one hundred out of ten. i pass over the size in this one. i'm sorry i could no longer save it interior of it although. no longer many human beings can write poems like this. solid interest, i'm hoping to study greater in case you have any.
2016-11-01 08:14:27 · answer #2 · answered by stever 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd say it's a pretty good effort, but exactly as funny...so I'd say a 6/10. But I like the rhyming though, I could nvr rhyme...
2007-01-25 21:53:42 · answer #3 · answered by sugarscamp 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8 funny
2007-01-25 23:01:04 · answer #4 · answered by Jodi C 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
as the story does now end,
I sit and ponder wheres the grin.
Alas I say its not a joke,
it is a poem for us dumbazz fokes.
2007-01-25 21:46:37 · answer #5 · answered by Wat Da Hell 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10/10 great job
2007-01-26 00:12:32 · answer #6 · answered by laney 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10 - definitly a ten
lol!
2007-01-25 22:13:50 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
9 thats pretty dam good. did u write that?
2007-01-25 21:41:11 · answer #8 · answered by Night visions 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ah bless, Il give you a score of ten its friday.......
2007-01-25 22:54:26 · answer #9 · answered by Richbitch 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ha ha ha - very nice.
I'll give you an 8 :-)
2007-01-25 21:41:12 · answer #10 · answered by Great Dane 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋