Random story.?

Question

Lets compose a little random story that makes a bit of sense, but is completely twisted (try to keep it clean).

Okay, I'll start (everyone continue where the last person left off)

Here:

Little Jimmy was walking through the hallway of the school when suddenly he heard a loud noise. He ran in the direction of the noise to see if he could figure out what it was. To his suprise it was................


(next person write a small paragraph and dont end your sentences. )

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As someone has already mentioned... yes, there is the problem where others are typing at the same time, submit it and the order gets messed up, but since it makes no sense, it's still quite funny.

interesting ideas everyone! lol

Answer 1

...the sound was coming from a locker, but not a full sized one, a little one like the kind under the fire extinguisher. He knew that freshman had been stuffed into the full sized ones, but that locker was too small, or was it. He smelled something. Something that was like a mix of Axe and week old Baloney that you forgot you left in the tupperware. He looked at the bottom of the locker and something began to drip...

Answer 2

not two elephants fighting, not a fat person jumping up and down, not the ceiling collapsing, not a bad contestant from American Idol, not a squirrel being pushed off a tree by a chipmunk, not a bunch of dogs barking for no reason, not famous Tour De France winner Lance Armstrong crashing on his bicycle into a clown on a unicycle, not a monkey with a neon tie and a hat that says,"hey, how ya doin'?" falling off a stack of fresh fruit, not a guy from New York slipping on a banana peel, but a group of trouble-makers popping some fireworks in school.

Answer 3

it is nice, and interesting. I do have some comments on the right thanks to strengthen it although. and those you may take or go away, it is purely my 2-cents. first of all, on the starting up, because you said the chair lifts at the starting up i idea she become like stuck on a chair elevate. So purely make it more suitable sparkling the position she actual is. also, I understand she had had a stressful couple of days-- all of us understand vehicle hardship sucks. yet i do not realize why she become SO disillusioned about it, even at the same time as she and her associates had gotten to the hotel. Like, why couldn't she have interesting now? i wager there is probably more suitable to it than purely vehicle hardship it really is frightening her. yet her desirous to "disappear" made me imagine that there will be a more suitable difficulty than that. And my very last question, and this may properly be something you've been already planning on answering in a while interior the tale, yet why become Viktor lengthy gone for 6 years when they were "like brother and sister" in severe college? So i wish those comments help. you've some good description and metaphors in there, so i wish you keep operating!

Answer 4

getting louder & louder until he couldn't figure out where to go to find out what this noise was but suddenly there were noises everywhere so Jimmy became very confused until something caught his eye in one of the classrooms beside the music room & as he opened the door to his surprise he saw a ............

Answer 5

This won't work because while you are typing several other people might be submitting answers so you can't control the sequence.

Answer 6

the fire chief's Dalmatian got loose in the school. The Principal was chasing him down the halls with a leash in one hand and ....

Answer 7

it was a melted baloney and cheese sandwhich.it was oozing out the locker holes.then he heard another noise in the boys bathroom. it was

Answer 8

An elephant smashing a Toyota....

Answer 9

ya it was none of those but you slowly dying as u hear them

Answer 10

someone letting a big fart!