I'm going to give my gf a paper flower and a not with it that says this,
"This flower represents my love for you, Unlike all other flowers this will not die, my love for you will not die, this flower will last as long as you let it, our love will last as long as we let it, this flower may look simple but there a lot more to it, our love may look simple but there a hole lot more to it, even if you were to throw this flower away the memorie of it will last in my heart forever, even if we were to throw our love away the memorie of you would last in my heart forever you mean the world to me, aways & forever yours..
What you think ladies?
2007-01-24 06:21:43 · 49 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I think its lovely - I would be over the moon to get that from my beloved!
2007-01-24 06:24:44 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Try this. Pretty much the same as what you wrote. A few edits to make it flow a bit better and some spelling corrections. Please read and see it was done with good intentions.
"This flower is a symbol to represent my love for you. Unlike all other flowers this one will not die as my love for you will not die. This flower will last as long as you protect it. Our love will last as long as we let it. Although this flower may look simple there is more than meets the eye as is the case with our love.There is a whole lot more to it. More than my heart can express. Even if you were to throw this flower away the memory of it will last in my heart forever. Even if we were to throw our love away the memory of you would be imprinted in my heart forever. You mean the world to me, always & forever yours..
It is really sweet i'm sure she will love it!
2007-01-24 08:06:08 · answer #2 · answered by itgirl23 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This flower represents my love for you, Unlike all other flowers and like my love for you, neither will die, this flower like our love will last as long as we let it. This Flower like our love, may look simple but there is a whole lot more to it. Even if you were to throw this flower away, like our love, the memories of it will last in my heart forever. You mean the world to me, always & forever yours
Great letter a little long winded. I hope that your not offended that I revised it. I kept it the same just shortened it.
2007-01-24 06:33:25 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The whole paper flower idea sounds cute....however the note itself I'll give you an 8/10. Why 8. First of all the confidence you had to post the note on-line and hear what random people think about it....next would be on a not so positive note it makes you sound like a bit of a stalker...and then you need to spell check...overall it's cute though.
2007-01-24 06:39:25 · answer #4 · answered by Lucky 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Uh... it's sweet and the intention is good, but honestly (and i'm all about honesty) EVERYONE compares women and love to flowers. If you want to REALLY knock her socks off think of something else that's beautiful and enduring. You'll get points for originality, nothing any other guy writes for her will compare, and your note will stand out in her mind as different for a long time to come. I.M. me if you want suggestions or just forget I said anything and go for the gold!
Good luck with the "wooing"!
2007-01-24 06:31:55 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi,
well its a bit over the top for my taste, I would run a mile! You need to check your spelling as that would look like you did not care/are not educated and just scribbled in haste. Also look at the punctuation... Is this meant to be a big time declaration of love? Will she be up for that? Perhaps you speak to her all the time like this, if so, that's cool.... good luck with the note...what colour is the flower?...I wonder...
2007-01-24 06:49:14 · answer #6 · answered by Susie Drew 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are a wonderful boyfriend. I think the sentiment is beautiful and if it were given to me, I'd never, ever forget it and the paper flower. I'm thinking it is worded so beautifully it doesn't need to be this long. You really said it all at the beginning, so why not end it after "...our love will last as long as we let it." She's lucky to have you!
2007-01-24 06:28:01 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's great! Make sure you are the one who make the paper flower. My ex gave me a paper flower but it was made by a girl from his work. That shows that he didn't put time into it. I wasn't pleased about that.
2007-01-24 07:03:29 · answer #8 · answered by GJ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hmmm.....first of all, use spell check so you look smart and loving : )
I think saying "our love will last as long as we let it" sounds a little off. How about "I will work hard to keep our love fresh and new and try to make each day with you the best it can be." Something about putting effort into it would be good.
2007-01-24 06:26:23 · answer #9 · answered by schweetums 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
I think it is very sweet, as long as you have been seeing this girl for quite awhile. You don't want to scare her away by coming on too strong, too soon.
Before you give it to her though, I would strongly recommend fixing the spelling, syntax and grammatical errors (i.e.: "whole, not "hole." Also, that entire note is one, long, run on sentence).
Girls love an intelligent guy.
Good luck!
2007-01-24 06:28:46 · answer #10 · answered by mistaken4sane 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's a very nice idea...only you might want to fix the spelling. Memory...there's (as in there is) and maybe stop the run-on sentence and turn it into 4 or 5 sentences.
It's certainly better than dead flowers. :)
2007-01-24 06:28:11 · answer #11 · answered by jackie jo 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋