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i like this one woman alot...and she digs poetry...so how about you helping me by posting a love poem on here that i can use...all donations will be much appreciated...

2007-01-23 13:09:41 · 10 answers · asked by roobeng.indahouse 3 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

10 answers

This one is by Rumi

Oh Beloved,
take me.
Liberate my soul.
Fill me with your love and
release me from the two worlds.

If I set my heart on anything but you
let fire burn me from inside.

Oh Beloved,
take away what I want.
Take away what I do.
Take away what I need.
Take away everything
that takes me from you.

2007-01-23 13:36:01 · answer #1 · answered by childofGod 4 · 0 0

Hmmm...

I have nothing to hide,
or anything to deny
because now I don't have a reason to cry
you picks me up, when I fall
and you are my princess after all.

If you break up with her, try these:

If I was about to die,
this v ery moment
I'd rip out my heart,
give it 2 you, and pray that you'd become a different person

If I was about to die
this very moment
I'd stare at the floor
and wonder how long it would take
for me to sink into it


I wrote all the poems. Good luck!
Well, I am a girl, so the "princess" part in the 1st poem was obviously prince.

Glad 2 help

2007-01-23 21:14:16 · answer #2 · answered by jaguargrrl27 1 · 0 1

Thee sound a mist of flowery angels
hasten to cling on my best judgement.
Be thy judge upon greater values.
The sulfar of the little children drained
of their lifeless blood upon vampire
suckling insects.
She swarms upon me with her life of love
She looks gazed and poignant
I want to take a dip into her womb
and reverse the triangular shaped swarm

2007-01-23 21:13:46 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

JIGSAW

Broken in your eyes
my will shatters

Holding my heart together
the warm, red edges cut
like kisses in winter

I hand you the puzzle of me
(hoping)
you take your time

Piece by piece

2007-01-23 21:21:31 · answer #4 · answered by CarinaPapa 4 · 0 1

Its love, its love, its love-
I am going crazy, I am going mad;

Its so sensuous, its kind of
awesome and blithe
to be in love, to be in your thoughts;

Its love, its love, its love-
I am going crazy, I am going mad;

When I miss you, my heart feels the heat;
When I am with you, every
moment becomes sweet;

Its love, its love, its love-
I am going crazy, I am going mad;

Sans you my days become lengthier,
so do my nights turn out to be;
I am still in a maze which season is this;

Its love, its love, its love-
I am going crazy, I am going mad;

Simple words become splendid odes-
courtesy your so sweet ways, voice
and thoughts;

Its love, its love, its love-
I am going crazy, I am going mad

2007-01-23 21:22:11 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Haha, u know what??? Something corny is always sweet--no, seriously...like, sure, try your best but evn if your best is like...well, cheezy, your sweetheart will think that the fact that you actually tried to make them special makes them seriously special...that...or SHakespear!!!!

2007-01-23 21:13:51 · answer #6 · answered by Aaliya K 1 · 0 1

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE BLUE
A FACE LIKE YOURS
BELONGS IN THE ZOO

2007-01-23 21:18:53 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

roses are red
violets and black
look at your front
its as flat as your back
go get a boob job
come back and rub my knob

2007-01-23 21:13:45 · answer #8 · answered by mike Z 3 · 0 2

lol ya noe if you at least tryy she will accept that.. if not try googlein poems..

best of luck. my wishes to you

2007-01-23 21:12:27 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0 2

I love you, but how can i miss if you if you dont leave?!?!

2007-01-23 21:12:31 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1 1

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