do you like this poem? i wrote it for my boyfriend jimmy. we're like soul-mates. tell me if you like it! thanks.
Where’d the time go??
When I’m free, you’re not there;
When You’re Free, I’m not there..
Our time flies by and we talk on
As I look down upon this platform in which I walk on
I think of you.
Where’d the time go??
Where’d the time go??
I miss you every waking second,
Until we talk again.
We try to squeeze in,
Our relationship *(so distant)
Yet though, it seems as if I am your wife in marriage.
We talk about our future (together)
We talk about our dreams (together)
We even talk about our fantasies (together)
And that is why I love you so dearly.
Where is time going?
I’ve talked to you for 24 hours straight,
As though we’ve only talked for 2 minutes.
We look at the clock, and count on down.
But I picture us married (together),
You in suit, and I in gown.
Time may be flying by, but I just want you to know,
That this time is cherished and as well bringing us closer;
Closer to *(Our) life
Closer to *(Our) family
Closer to *(my) You
Closer to *(your) Me
Closer to *(Our) precious moments
Closer to *(Our) home
Closer to *(Our) kids
Closer to *(Our) relationship
Closer to *(my) love for you
As well as Closer to *(your) love for me
Where’d the time go??
The time is sitting still until I talk to you,
We’ll let our hearts out, until we have fully matured.
Where is the time going??
Time is going toward *(Our) dreams
I Love You, Jimmy!
And that is where *(Our) time is going.
2007-01-22 09:53:37 · 9 answers · asked by tren 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
A great poem to give him if you are sure he is in the same place emotionally. A great poem to write and I do enjoy it, but would hold onto it if you think for one second this would be overwhelming because it is full of deep strong emotion. Personally, I do enjoy it.
2007-01-22 09:58:47 · answer #1 · answered by tryin4freedom 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Who wrote the poem?
2007-01-22 17:58:14 · answer #2 · answered by Phillip 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that was really cool. I liked it a lot and I tjink that your bf will like it to. I am glad you guys are having a godd relationship! I think you shoudl give that to him because that was really sweet.
2007-01-22 17:59:51 · answer #3 · answered by Caitlyn C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice,keep it up,hope Jimmy feels the same way and u too are happy now and forever.
2007-01-22 18:05:25 · answer #4 · answered by pacific30 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem tells him exactly how you feel about him and your relationship.
I like it..
2007-01-22 17:59:15 · answer #5 · answered by StarShine G 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poem is good. You have a good heart. If you know of any women that think like you please point them my way.
2007-01-22 18:01:23 · answer #6 · answered by grtoo9 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's so beautiful ! =]<3*
2007-01-22 17:57:22 · answer #7 · answered by lalala 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well for me aslong iT came to the bottom of your heart THATS THE IMPORTANT PART...RIGHT???
GOOD LUCK
2007-01-22 17:59:10 · answer #8 · answered by angel 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it.
2007-01-22 18:16:24 · answer #9 · answered by john 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋