I am up dating my resume and have been stuck on making one final sentacne complete. If you can help me refrase this question to sound more professional it would be greatly appreciated. The notation needs to read something to the affect of," Assist (or facilitate) two business owners in a small corporation in a start up company."
If anyone can give me some ideas for re-wording this for my resume it would be a huge help. Thank you!
2007-01-21 09:18:34 · 7 answers · asked by Abel R 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Assisted the owners of a small business during the start-up of a their small company.
or
Assited the startup of a small company, workign directly with the two owners.
(it can't be a small company AND a corporation surely ?)
P.S. I hope the spelling in your resume is better than your question.
2007-01-21 09:24:05 · answer #1 · answered by rchlbsxy2 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sentence rephrasing: Assisted the business owners of a small corporation during start-up.
2007-01-21 09:28:25 · answer #2 · answered by info seeker 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Assist business owners in the start up for a ___________ (what kind) company.
Strongly suggest you use spell check or "refrasing" your "sentance" won't help your resume.
2007-01-25 09:08:55 · answer #3 · answered by Marilyn S 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would leave it as is ,omitting, the part "in a start up company" as it is descriptive and you already do that by saying "small";.
2007-01-21 09:28:17 · answer #4 · answered by jettx 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Provide support to small-business owners, including, but not limited to, (and then list what you do for them, specifically, ie. data processing, filing, answering incoming phone calls, making travel arrangements, etc.)"
Good luck!
2007-01-21 09:29:00 · answer #5 · answered by metakine 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Was activley involved in the start up of
2007-01-25 09:09:35 · answer #6 · answered by Rosco 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I sure do hope you have spell check for your resume....no offense
2007-01-21 09:23:39 · answer #7 · answered by Lauren_Ann20 5 · 3⤊ 1⤋