As I Look out into this world today, I see my fellow man at ods-Is he here in a practical way, or just for Gods? It hurts to see this life I love, filled with so much Push & Shove-Human beings always stating "I'm Right", not seeing their own morbid fright- 4 2 be correct my friend, is 2 realize that your life will end- 4 better or worse there is just 1 way, that is to give the best while you enjoy the stay. Can't you see that you're accepting religion, is only a way to find recognition-how many I "Am Saved" will die today-in hope of a life after "A BETTER WAY"? U call it HEAVEN as I have often heard-the sheep of God all because "THEY FEARED!", Well I am not afraid to venture here, that Heaven on Earth is also near-but it wont happen until we as FREE-THINKING men-look to one another & call out FRIEND! It's your religion that I see stands in the way-adding a barrier to continue as we become the PREY!-4 what is it 4 a man to lose his own soul-Gain the world for THE FUTURE this is my goal!
2007-01-19
10:23:48
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➔ Religion & Spirituality
Are you god? You must be, cause that rocked.
2007-01-19 10:29:56
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answered by boozer 3
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... That made no sense. Not to mention it's in what I call "stupid speak," chat speak is hard to read. Especially for those of us who are used to reading words for what they are and not what others think they are.
Paragraphs? They help people read. Fragment sentences. Like. This. Pain in butt. Because fragmented sentences make no gosh darned sense especially when it's so fragmented that a normal person reads it and says "oh no, my eyes are bleeding"
Missing proper gramatical structure, miss use of whatever the "-" is called. Missuse of the English language and sentence structure. Chat speak when you're trying to talk to an audience at large. Personalization and attempted, and failed, familiarity with your audience. You should never show familiarity with your audience it makes you seem very arrogant.
Incorrect spelling of "odds" "Gods"(god's what exactly?) "u" "wont" (wont is what a person is likely to do no matter what else is said. won't is the contraction of will not). You should not have used "Human beings" and instead just "Humans. The numbers have to go, the caps have to go. Sounds so preachery despite your supposed dislike of god. Should not have used the & sign. Every number, miss spelling, capsed word and chat lingo you used disrupted the flow of your writing.
And then you assume that your entire audience would be male "FREE-THINKING men." There should be no dash there, I am quite certain and I am also certain that women are currently counted as people and living beings and even *gasp* equal to men. Your work would irritate the average reader, anger any and everyone because the entire work is irrationally written and makes no sense. What point are you getting at, which conclusion do you wish to draw? There is no clear path of thought within your... jumble, only words thrown together in hopes of making sense.
Try harder next time.
2007-01-19 18:39:03
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answered by spirenteh 3
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What will it profit a man if he should gain the whole world and lose his own soul? For what can a man give in exchange for his soul?
Your philosophy will condemn you. Isn't it a foolish idea for a finite man to debate with an infinite God? You will need to pay fro your sins. There is no escape. If only you would listen to your conscience, that you are in need of mercy, then you would repent and be forgiven.
2007-01-19 18:29:24
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answered by Anonymous
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The Bible makes a heck of a lot more since than what you just wrote my friend. You should read it some time because your soul is headed for eternal damnation whether you believe in God(, the Bible, Heaven or Hell) or not. If you read it you would also know that every man shall confess that He is Lord, that includes you.
2007-01-19 18:31:37
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answered by lil_bit 4
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You know, atheists always say that following Jesus is following the crowd, but really I believe that following Jesus is going against the crowd, leaving your pride behind.
By the way, what is with the bolded words? Is it a message? "A better way they feared. Free-thinking friend, pray for the future."
That's what I saw. And if that was intentional... I am praying for the future.
2007-01-19 18:29:47
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answered by Faith 2
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Hmm? Guess my finite mind is to delusional to understand what the hell you are saying.
Remember, questions get answered on Yahoo answers. Ask one intended for an answer next time friend.
2007-01-19 18:30:14
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answered by Goober W 4
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Wow. I'm an atheist, and I still think this is pointless hogwash. What, did you expect people to suddenly start dropping to their knees going "OMG U R SO RITE I AM GONNA STAR UR QUESTION AND IMMEDIATELY TAKE UP ALL UR BELEEFS!" or something?
2007-01-19 18:27:30
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answered by gomez_leovinus 3
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without God, there is no future, man. I'm sorry you don't understand. God is love & He loves you, even though His children are imperfect. I admit, we miss the mark, we make mistakes just like everybody else. But most of us are sincere. Peace.
2007-01-19 18:30:29
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answered by wanda3s48 7
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The height of hyposcrisy. You criticize others for believing in what they regard as truth, and now you are telling us what we should believe because it's your truth. Poetic justice?
2007-01-19 18:32:43
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answered by DL 3
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Do not blame it all your problems on god. A good craftsman never blames his tools. And it all started from when Adam and eve ate from the tree of knowledge.
2007-01-19 18:29:23
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answered by cpc joe 1
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Rehab
2007-01-19 18:28:14
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answered by mikerow992003 2
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