what woukd you think, from a guy to a girl.
The One
Within the Changing of the seasons
With a cause not known to everyone
There is an underling reason
A feeling, felt for just one
An intense emotional Drain
For the one I so desire
Though felt in vain
With the feelings that takes me higher
As I sit here pondering
About how to get her back in my life
My mind will not stop wandering
To the thought of how not to seam rife
Whenever I see her, She has a smile
Knowing we will be together for a while
2007-01-19 09:11:04 · 4 answers · asked by The One 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
yes, this is an origanial, from my own mind, and was wrote for a school assigment, but i wrote it with her in mind
2007-01-19 09:18:51 · update #1
Honestly, i think that the girl would feel very flattered and if she likes you, you got her, did you make this up? It's a very good poem.
2007-01-19 09:15:56 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats very nice, I love the word pondering for some reason. Anyways...your good at writing and I think you should send this to her, you stud muffin you! :) No really, Good Luck, hope u get her :)
BTW I understand oh too well intense emotional drain, I feel for you :(
2007-01-19 17:17:40 · answer #2 · answered by kel b 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow, thats amazing. i would be so shocked. i like a guy who can write poetrey
2007-01-19 17:33:49 · answer #3 · answered by rachel v 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i would think it was sexy and sweet and i would love it with everything.
2007-01-19 17:15:26 · answer #4 · answered by Steelers Chick 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋