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Question

Travelling by car has got many Advantages, like :
1.You are in control about when and where you go.
2. You can stop when you want to for breaks .
3.You can eat in the car, for save on bills, and you can also take all of your stuff, in this way you will be ready if it rains, or gets cold, or if your shoes get dirty , you can have extra shoes.
4. You can sleep in the car to save hotel bills.

But there are lots of disadvantages too, for example
1.You need to know how to drive.
2.You need to rent or buy a car, and to take care of it. You have to fill up the car with petrol.
3. You need to be able to read a map, and face up with traffic, and road construction.
4. You need to be able to know when you are too tired, and stop the travel for have relax.
5. If anything goes wrong, you will have to cope with it. Breakdowns, getting lost.

So, finally I think that the train is more fast, cheap and economic than the auto, the only disadvantages is that you have to travel on certain times.

Answer 1

Travelling by car has many advantages. First of all you can travel wherever an whenever you want. You can use a car in case of urgency. For example if you want to drive to the doctor you don’t have to wait for a bus. Also you don’t have to travel when timetable says you can. You can quickly move and you can travel from door to door.

Travelling by car also has some disadvantages. Sometimes you can be stuck in a traffic jam, you have to pay for a car park and petrol. Cars are less comfortable than trains. You can’t sleep when you drive, you can’t relax. cars pollute the air more than trains. I prefer travelling by car to travelling by train or bus. I feel more free in my own car and I can move quickly from place to place.

Answer 2

Another disadvantage of travelling via train is that once you're off the train you're on foot to your destination. What if the train drops you off MILES from where you really need to be? Then what? Hop in a cab? From there- what?

Advantage #5 of travelling by car- drive direct to your destination without having to resort to other means of transportation.
Advantage 3 makes no sense to me at all.. Convoluted verbiage.

Answer 3

I am in agreement with you.

Also, with a car, you have to pay attention to your surroundings, there is a greater risk of having an accident-there are many other drivers on the road. On a train, there aren't many accidents.

Answer 4

was it a question?..seems to be a suggestion :-)
thanx

Answer 5

No.