I am sharing a poem I wrote... ANY feedback is welcome.
when i stop thinking, everything makes sense
whole, complete, persona of divinity, bleeding apes of infinity
strapped to the boards preceeding the new rape of malignity
burden of truth not truth not betrayal
betrayal nonfiction nonsense, it is burial
language deception, birthed of fiery angels in witness
information, particular, insomnia, magnification
2007-01-18 20:22:10 · 2 answers · asked by Invisible_Flags 6 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
It don't rime I never liked a damn poem that didn't rime. What you don't know how to rime.
Mary had a little lamb.
Its flea's was white as snow.
Everywhere that Mary went the lamb would go too.
See how nice that rimes good poem.
You shore got a lot of big words though.
I like you anyway I give you a star. BB
2007-01-18 20:34:24 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Is there a message in there?
bleeding apes of infinity?
new rape of malignity?
Sorry, I don't get it.
2007-01-19 04:31:42 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋