What do you guys think of this as a valentine's day not that I am thinking about sending to a woman I am dating? along with flowers of course.
"For an amazing and most beautiful woman; every moment I spend with you is nothing but precious. Your presence in my life brings never ending smiles to the heart before the face."
2007-01-18 06:24:48 · 41 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
how about we have come along way my heart is yours and that way it will stay. it took a truely special day like today to find the words i want to say. you are a amazeing,beautiful and precious flower i want to give you my time every hour! your presence in my life brings endless smiles im in this with you for the extra mile i love you happy valentines day to the woman in my life that i want to stay!
2007-01-18 06:49:16 · answer #1 · answered by i am who ever u say i am 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Amazing
2007-01-18 12:52:00 · answer #2 · answered by camicat 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it doesn't sound sincere. You should right it as though you were talking to her in conversation. When you try to use words other than the type of words you would use in everyday speech, it tends to come across a little fake. The first sentence is great but work on the sencond one a little. You should do fine. Good luck to you and I hope it works out.
2007-01-18 06:32:04 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very beautiful, the only part I would change is the "heart before the face". I would just say, 'never ending smiles to not only my face, but my heart as well.'
2007-01-18 06:28:43 · answer #4 · answered by quortnie11 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lovely. It's sweet but not rambling and long. It's something that, if I recieved that note, would make me feel so special and flattered. I think you've done a great job, and the woman who receives that note will be quite happy.
2007-01-18 06:28:28 · answer #5 · answered by Misscheerios2 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I dont know if you want a womens view but if that is what you are looking for i think that is a great note. as a women if a guy sent that to me it would definately make me smile inside and out. i think that its a great note to be sent.
2007-01-18 06:28:41 · answer #6 · answered by Lindsay R 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awwww...it's loverly, she ought to really like it, darling!
Although, I think possibly...
"Your presence in my life brings never-ending smiles to my heart, even before you see one on my face." ???
Just a suggestion-
Go get 'er, Tiger!
2007-01-18 06:46:25 · answer #7 · answered by Ask Shirley 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
even though im a girl, i`ll give you a womens view of how it sounds and it sounds so sweet! I think who ever is gettitng that note is lucky.
2007-01-18 06:30:05 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was beautiful, but at the end maybe ..."to my heart as well as my face." Would flow better.
2007-01-18 06:27:40 · answer #9 · answered by lc 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it would put a big *** smile on my face and the flowers would be a great touch
2007-01-18 06:28:43 · answer #10 · answered by ashl2e 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋