i wrote this for my gf. we are in a long distance relationship. what do you guys think? sendable?
i miss the way you look at me
i miss the way you smile
i miss the warmth and feelings felt
when i could hold you tight
i miss your kiss
i miss your touch
im missing everything so much
and even though youre far away
i love you more with everyday
2007-01-18 00:13:55 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
send it to me sweety haha .. its good honey she'll love it, i love it. only send me the flowers instead haha
2007-01-18 00:22:47 · answer #1 · answered by ♥lois c♥ ☺♥♥♥☺ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No matter how good or bad at writing you are, it's the thought and effort that counts. I believe that you've put in enough effort so you should not waste the opportunity to send it. However, if it is not up to your standard, you probably shouldn't send it.If you just keep working on it it may get better, just have a think about it.
2007-01-18 00:22:43 · answer #2 · answered by Mercenary Poet 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like second rate Hallmark stuff. A half step above roses are red
2007-01-18 00:17:13 · answer #3 · answered by Brad R 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
it's sweet and sincere I'm sure she would like it. I'tsnice to get things like that from you guy even if you are not far away.
2007-01-18 00:18:02 · answer #4 · answered by ♦ Phoenix Rising♦ 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Dude i think that was a well thought out poem.
2007-01-18 00:27:13 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like really good.I would enter it in a contest
2007-01-18 00:20:38 · answer #6 · answered by lovely soul with insite 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its pretty sweet.
2007-01-18 00:16:58 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats very nice
2007-01-18 00:20:41 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it is really really good. it is beater then my poems
2007-01-18 00:18:35 · answer #9 · answered by fionn hannon 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋