The boy that used to make her smile,
Now makes her cry, and cry for a while.
She'd loved him before she'd even known his name.
And once she got to know him, her heart went insane!
The first day of school, some faces were new.
She didn't notice his until weeks passed, a few,
But after she saw the beauty in his eyes,
She'd never known they could make her cry.
That love she felt was not to be explained,
For, even she, couldn't give it a name.
She wondered if he could feel it too.
The way they were, the way they knew.
Unfortunately, this was not true.
This one way love was all she knew.
He didn't like her nearly as much,
And for this reason, she feared his touch…
She cried all day, yet found the hope,
To try and climb the "broken heart" rope.
Just as she was nearing the top,
Her shoe slipped, and she fell of.
She cried again, just wondering why,
Such a beautiful boy, with beautiful eyes,
Could make such a pretty girl cry...
2006©Kate Steinberg
2007-01-17 21:55:28 · 11 answers · asked by thissilentangel 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I'm not in High School. I'm 13. lol But yeah, It's really hard for me to deal with.
2007-01-17 22:02:12 · update #1
Really nice poem! Something we 've all been through in high school! I miss those times! Feelings were more sincere!
Take care of your feelings!
2007-01-17 22:00:08 · answer #1 · answered by Roubini 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i cud've never ever read smethn so beautiful 2 xpress wat a person feels...
i kno its hard 2 let go of memories, its a kind of torture dat we've 2 live wid until our heart itself decides 2 move on. no matter wat ne friend or ne 1 wud say 2 make us feel better we wud neve listen 2 em...
time at times helps us 2 let go of pain dat we've been enduring inside...
wid time things wud get better...theres no other solution 2 da pain dat u carry in ur heart
i've been tryn 2 get over my pain for da past 5 months...n am still there where i was 5 months back...
2007-01-18 06:08:57 · answer #2 · answered by moooooooovin 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
When we go on one way trips, we must also be prepared for getting stranded and knwing that we got lost
2007-01-18 06:02:07 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem.
2007-01-18 06:22:05 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
you should go on
www.deviantart.com
its full of people who write poetry profesionally and they will be able to give you alot more feedback than yahoo answers
2007-01-18 05:58:39 · answer #5 · answered by sparkles_x 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good!
2007-01-18 06:10:45 · answer #6 · answered by hippie_chick69love 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow that was nice good luck
2007-01-18 05:59:02 · answer #7 · answered by Donets'k 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wonderful and touchy !
Let's have more of your virgin poetry.
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2007-01-18 05:58:48 · answer #8 · answered by Cyphor 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what a nice poem!
2007-01-18 06:00:01 · answer #9 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you should be a poet
2007-01-18 05:59:48 · answer #10 · answered by Martin T 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋