Just wandering what you all think of this poem I wrote. It s not about anyone in particular, just something I wiped up...
I tried to write a poem, I wanted to make you smile,
I could have said, I Love you, or walk a thousand miles,
that may sound poetic and not real sincere.
Its hard to put into words how I feel in here.
In here is where you are you've been there from the start,
You alone and no-one else, buried deep inside my
HEART.
2007-01-17 11:50:29 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
awe i love thattt ! [=
i should say that to my crushh.`
hahahaha (: anyways, love it !
2007-01-17 11:55:35 · answer #1 · answered by Taylor. 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As an accomplished poet (published 5 times by Quill Publishings) and an accredited song writer. I find it quite appealing and easy to read. The flow and form is good. The rhyme schem is also great. I throughly enjoyed reading this. Good job. If you write more or have any intentions to continue with it I would be more than happy to write music and a melody for it. You may be a songwriter in waiting. Contact me on yahoo 360 or at my e-mail address. forgiving_madison@yahoo.com hope to hear from you soon. Luke
2007-01-17 19:57:18 · answer #2 · answered by forgiving_madison 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm a guy, do you want the truth or you want me to lie and agree with everyone else?
2007-01-17 19:56:05 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow thats pretty good
2007-01-17 19:53:54 · answer #4 · answered by Wesley™ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dat is amazing if u did write bout some` omg..
2007-01-17 19:58:30 · answer #5 · answered by lAdY ClUMSY 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
VERY CREATIVE I THINK YOU SHOULD TRY THIS WEBSITE OUT: poetry-and-quotes.com
2007-01-17 19:54:26 · answer #6 · answered by milly 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats sweet
2007-01-17 19:54:07 · answer #7 · answered by sadie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
aw cute
2007-01-17 19:53:50 · answer #8 · answered by iheartludacris 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
bravo! Nicely done!
2007-01-17 19:53:54 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
aww tht was so sweet!
2007-01-17 19:54:18 · answer #10 · answered by ..jennyluvz.. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋