cherry blossom tree
lovely piece of nature-art
blowing in the wind
a blossom falls to the ground
the sun is unveiled
trees glimmer all around me
with internal joy
the most beautiful of plants
2007-01-17 09:46:45 · 10 answers · asked by andrew 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Quotations
errrmm... sorry to burst ur bubbles but haiku is 5 sylyblz 7sylyblz 5slylblz
but I LOVE THE POEM!
if iw as helpful make me best answer 0=)
2007-01-17 09:55:52 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
A Haiku is only three lines
5 Sylables
7 Sylables
5 Sylables
2007-01-17 09:55:18 · answer #2 · answered by mattsigma 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As the first answerer said Haiku has three lines 5,7,5. It is usually like that, a short poem of 3 lines.ex.
On Being Dead
Death will leave no trace
Only a white frozen face
A sad tale of fear.
2007-01-17 10:33:54 · answer #3 · answered by Erase Program Read Only Memory 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is truly a special gift. No, Santa is not part of nature, but of the season we celebrate; not the reason, of course. I like Bruce's C&C of the individual haiku's. I love the whole, but my favorite is too darned hard to pick out. Isn't zephyr your haiku and scifaiku name? I'm sure it is. It isn't an arcane word, just rarely used, but it is absolutely correct in the haiku. Thank you and may you have the most wonderful Christmas of all. .
2016-05-24 01:17:19 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your poem does not
conform to haiku format
which is 5 7 5
2007-01-17 09:51:25 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
haiku only has 3 lines.
the first line has 5 syllables
the second line 7
the third line 5.
2007-01-17 09:49:38 · answer #6 · answered by Dovahkiin 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My winter answer
Is that haiku has three lines
Yours is a bit long
2007-01-18 01:08:49 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not actually haiku but is very impressing!!!
2007-01-17 11:26:58 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
not sure about the trees line or the internal joy line rest seem ok
2007-01-17 09:52:02 · answer #9 · answered by reshadow31 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah that seems to work. i like it :)
2007-01-17 09:50:09 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋