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The most critical situation occurred for the first time with the contractor PT. SBG, where in the early implementation they had got non-technical problems which made the work delayed for 2 months, but further, the company was even unable to proceed with the implementation properly due to *unsmooth* cash flow on the site which result in a significant delay.
2007-01-17 08:00:06 · 9 answers · asked by answermeplease 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
The most critical situation initially occurred with the contractor PT. SGB, where in the early stages of implementation non-technical problems were incurred which held the work up for 2 months. As if this was not enough, the company was then unable to proceed properly with the implementation on account of irregular on-site cash flow, which caused a significant delay.
2007-01-17 08:32:38 · answer #1 · answered by Doethineb 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I made a couple other corrections too:
The most critical situation occurred for the first time with the contractor PT. SBG, where in the early implementation they had non-technical problems which DELAYED THE WORK for 2 months, but further, the company was even unable to proceed with the implementation properly due to UNEVEN cash flow on the site which resultED in a significant delay.
2007-01-17 16:08:51 · answer #2 · answered by Chris H 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
u should use "gotten", not got in the 2nd sentence :)
u should use "the company was ALSO (not Even) unable to proceed.... due to "unstable" cash flow...."
something along those lines. good luck
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2007-01-17 16:09:08 · answer #3 · answered by sasmallworld 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Perhaps "irregular cash flow?" By the way, there are a couple of grammatical errors also, you might want to edit it.
2007-01-17 16:07:42 · answer #4 · answered by magpie_queen 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Rough or unsteady
2007-01-17 16:59:57 · answer #5 · answered by anonymous 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
uneven
2007-01-17 16:16:54 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
how about irregular or uneven?
2007-01-17 16:11:27 · answer #7 · answered by Maggie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
unsteady-jagged-unstable-fluctuating
2007-01-17 16:09:55 · answer #8 · answered by racer 51 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
JERKY
2007-01-17 16:11:47 · answer #9 · answered by ili8310230000 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋