im gunna give my boyfriend a card.so what you think bout this poem
10 things i hate about you
i hate the way you talk to me and the way you cut your hair .i hate the way you drive my car.i hate it when you stare i hate your big dumb combat boots and the way you read my mind i hate you so much it makes me sick it even makes me rime i hate the way your always right .i hate it when you lie i hate it when you make me laugh even worse when you make me cry i hate it that your not around and the fact that you didnt call but mostly i hate the way i hate you not even close.not even a little bit not even at all.
so what did you think??
2007-01-16 12:54:05 · 12 answers · asked by LoVeR** 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
10 things i hate about you
i hate the way you talk to me and the way you cut your hair .i hate the way you drive my car.i hate it when you stare i hate your big dumb combat boots and the way you read my mind i hate you so much it makes me sick it even makes me rime i hate the way your always right .i hate it when you lie i hate it when you make me laugh even worse when you make me cry i hate it that your not around and the fact that you didnt call but mostly i hate the way i dont hate you not even close.not even a little bit not even at all.
this one is the one the other one is wrong
2007-01-16 12:55:53 · update #1
it's pretty good but I would do a little work to it ( I would try to make it rhyme more). Like for ex: I'd say something like
I hate the way u talk to me! I hate what the way that u act; I hate the fact u stare at me & (u really don't give a crap). You've embrassed me, you've broken my heart. You use to make laugh but now all u do is make me cry. I think of those n'sync boys that say "bye-bye". Especially when u stare, its really makes me sick, your dumb combat boots smell like @#$5.
**ok, I'm not great at this but u kind of want to make it funny so that u can laugh at it in the future; and to keep him drawn and entertain abit....i don't know if u are just having fun by sending this to your bf or if u guys r made at one another. but, if he's mad he may just call u or email sending u one back just as hilarious
2007-01-16 13:07:41 · answer #1 · answered by Spotlight 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ehhhh... too much hate. I mean hate is such an evil word! Just be real. I mean i know its meant to be on the hilarious side, but i'm sure someone would take that offensive if they could. Lets not take that chance lol
2007-01-16 20:58:54 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why don't you quote a cooler movie.
"I only give the food to the women, Mr. Black. Women make the homes, men just make wars... and hooch. Adam was God's first draft - He got it right with Eve. Tell that to your readers, Mr. Black."
2007-01-16 21:01:57 · answer #3 · answered by John C 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well i think you like the movie alot especially the poem but like a song a poem is also musical.
2007-01-16 21:01:20 · answer #4 · answered by telly 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's cute, very creative. I just hope your boyfreind has a great sence of humor like you
2007-01-16 21:01:15 · answer #5 · answered by black_daisy2 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think he might start looking for someone who writes better poems. Poetry, or what ever you call it.
2007-01-16 21:01:49 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
What ever works for you.
Good Luck
2007-01-16 20:57:47 · answer #7 · answered by zen522 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
rhyme is not spelled rime. you're not around (not your not around) you're means--you are.
your --shows owndership.
Besides the bad spelling and grammar, I like your sentiments.
2007-01-16 20:59:13 · answer #8 · answered by bortiepie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that was the best scene in that whole movie!!!!
2007-01-16 20:57:48 · answer #9 · answered by raewrn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow....... y don u say i hav all these reasons to hate u but i only need one to be with u
2007-01-16 20:59:46 · answer #10 · answered by forrest b 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋