give me some feedback on this song i wrote. i plan to perform it for my girlfriend's birthday. let me know what you think! thanks!
here it is:
Its just one of those days
When you don't wanna wake up
Everything is fucked
Everybody sux
You don't really know why
But want justify
Rippin' someone's head off
No human contact
And if you interact
Your life is on contract
Your best bet is to stay away motherfucker
It's just one of those days!!
[chorus]
Its all about the he says she says bullshit
I think you better quit
Lettin' **** slip
Or you'll be leavin with a fat lip
Its all about the he says she says bullshit
I think you better quit talkin that ****
(Punk, so come and get it)
Its just one of those days
Feelin' like a freight train
First one to complain
Leaves with a blood stain
Damn right I'm a maniac
You better watch your back
Cuz I'm fuckin' up your program
And if your stuck up
You just lucked up
Next in line to get fucked up
Your best bet is to stay away motherfucker
Its just one of those days!!
[chorus]
I feel like ****
My suggestion is to keep your distance cuz right now im dangerous
We've all felt like ****
And been treated like ****
All those motherfuckers that want to step up
I hope you know I pack a chain saw
I'll skin your *** raw
And if my day keeps goin' this way I just might break somethin' tonight...
I hope you know I pack a chain saw
I'll skin your *** raw
And if my day keeps goin' this way I just might break somethin' tonight...
I hope you know I pack a chain saw
I'll skin your *** raw
And if my day keeps goin' this way I just might break your fuckin' face tonight!!
Give me somethin' to break
How bout your fuckin' face
I hope you know I pack a chain saw, what!!...
2007-01-15 16:12:51 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
This isnt romantic at all....sounds like ur trying to break it off here...if so yeah...if not umm! No!
2007-01-15 16:17:09 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
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2016-11-24 20:33:03 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Want to know how to get your ex back? Change yourself. Don't worry about changing other people, worry about changing yourself. Go to https://tr.im/kxiAF
Once you do that then you can start to worry about getting back together with your ex, other wise you will find that you are fighting about all the same things and getting no where. Do what it takes and I promise things will work out in your favor.
The funny thing is I came to the realization that I had to change a little too late. After I was kicked out and after I was about to lose the only things that truly mattered to me - her love. A funny thing happens when we truly love someone and lose them. We do what ever it takes to get them back. For me I had to drop bad habits that had caused not only our relationship to sour but practically every other relationship I had had in the past. Not only with women, but with friends, co-workers, family, you name it.
Which is why I say to you as my ex at the time said to me, the only thing you can do is change yourself. Work on yourself and improve on the person that you already are. Drop the negative things in your life that don't belong there and you will see all of your relationships start to take off to new heights.
2016-04-26 02:56:40 · answer #3 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats a limp bizkit song you didnt write that. but its a good song i love it
2007-01-15 16:26:45 · answer #4 · answered by fine_ass_fatty21 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Terrible, I think you are pulling our leg
2007-01-15 21:33:51 · answer #5 · answered by jaygirl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hope it goes well...keep on writing....you may get better...good luck...
2007-01-19 01:19:14 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
give up your crazy idea
2007-01-16 00:20:09 · answer #7 · answered by anis118030 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah it ok
2007-01-18 08:51:27 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok? and you want what?
you suck as a writer
2007-01-15 16:23:54 · answer #9 · answered by zether 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
what?
2007-01-16 14:29:18 · answer #10 · answered by dee_ann 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋