Ok its about persuading your principal not to cut off the star player on the football team because he has poor grades (well at least I choose the "not" option) Anyways,
I wrote about how its his OWN descion and not the school principals
and In the second paragraph I made my main support argument that it would hurt the schools rep. Ok can you help me out a little I got a few ideas but I want some more to make it more complete. So how could this hurt the schools rep? Please help out a little just give me some brief ideas backing this up. Thanks.
Oh and how long do you think the conclusion should be...
2007-01-15 15:16:31 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Well, normal essays contain 5 paragraphs.
1 intro paragraph: 5 sentences
- Includes an attention-grabbing intro
- You NEED a thesis, which is a sentence summarizing your essay.
3 body paragraphs: At least 5 sentences EACH
- Each paragraph must contain one thought or supportive idea that goes with your thesis.
- Use quotes to back up your facts.
Conclusion: 3 - 5 sentences
- Restate your thesis
- Leave the readers with a good ending.
Remember, use correct grammar/spelling and descriptive words.
2007-01-15 15:29:44 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, since he has failing grades apparently football is the only thing that makes him feel like he is "somebody." I don't think anyone is reall y proud to fail anything. So maybe the principal could give the player until the end of the quarter to raise his grades to C's and then take him off. This would give him motivation.
It could hurt the school because the school could start losing. Other schools could view this school as "stupid".
2007-01-15 17:54:01 · answer #2 · answered by gravytrain036 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OK this might not help but here ya go...
How about you write how the shouldnt let the athlete play. It is his/her own fault and shouldnt be allowed to play if the grades arent better. The only reason schools do this is to make the kid study so he will be able to play, and so if he/she doesnt make it in sports, which he/she probably wouldnt, then he/she will have something to fall back on...... I think it would be dumb to think otherwise and if you decide to keep going with this topic ill give you more ideas.
2007-01-17 12:22:32 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋