The ocean of time is haunting my island memories. It’s light a worshipping song, Like rhythm entwined fly a live leap to a turquoise sky, Where goddess hunger for me to embrace this new worlds kiss like warm honey wine.
2007-01-15 10:58:37 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
sure is a swell poem mister. i really am glad i got to read it. hope that is answer enuogh for you. please name me the winner this time. i haven't won one yet. okay?
2007-01-15 11:03:25 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is BEAUTIFUL.You should think about being a poet.Enter a contest and show your empowering words to everybody.They may not understand them,but the feel of it is wonderful
2007-01-15 19:05:29 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It has a questioning mind. The question of its existence... :o)
2007-01-15 19:03:49 · answer #3 · answered by wacky_racer 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool, I like it.
2007-01-15 19:08:06 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
you have the right idea, but it needs more rhyme, that's all what it needs
2007-01-15 19:05:07 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice.
2007-01-15 19:06:38 · answer #6 · answered by butterfly 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
crap
2007-01-15 19:02:16 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋