His ardent feeling for books has proven him a true bibliophile.
2007-01-15 05:18:30 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I think it sounds good just the way it is :)
2007-01-15 05:34:32 · answer #1 · answered by Miley Cyrus 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You might say:
His ardent feelings for books has caused him to be a true bibliophile.
2007-01-15 05:25:37 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's ridiculous I just came upon this question. I'm transcriber and I just finished writing the closing argument of a murder case..pretty much a persuasive speech. No, this sentence doesn't make sense. If you were talking to a jury (for example), you would be saying they were secretly in on letting "Bob" get off. Do you have to use the word connive? You could say, "Since Mike is unable to be here to tell you who took his life, please look at the facts and evidence in this case and find Bob guilty of murder in the (such and such) degree." Hope that helps:)
2016-05-24 06:57:23 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds okay. You could say His ardor for books, but if you must use ardent what you have is fine.
2007-01-15 05:24:10 · answer #4 · answered by krautlover2u 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why not try:
His ardent 'passion' for books....
instead of 'feeling'
and also 'have' insteasd of 'has'
2007-01-15 05:24:01 · answer #5 · answered by Next evolutionary step... 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The sentence is basically OK as is, unless you want to replace "feeling" with "passion."
2007-01-15 05:30:53 · answer #6 · answered by Gee Wye 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋