Hi Iam learning English a need help to correct mistakes poins to first person on help me?

Question

I usually get up at seven o´ clock.I go to the kitchen.Atake a cupp coffe.After that a go to the livingroom and I study English grammar.
Iam student from 7:00 to 9:00.
After that I go to the bathroom and take a shower.Then I put on my clothes and comb my hair.After that I go to the kitchen and I cook to my family.I usually cook eggs.We usually drink milk in the morning.
I always play with my children.After that he sometimes goes to the bedroom.Later he sleeps at one hour.a always like to kiss to my husband and we like to go to the mivies.
After that I cook.Then we eat together. we often drink juyce for the food.we rarely watch the TV.
My son likes to play with the computer then he slepps at nine o´ clock.
My husband and I aways to go to to sleep after midnight.

Answer 1

Rather than rewriting your piece, I offer some suggestions:

I would replace most of your "after that" with "then." Or combine sentences into compound sentences. For example: "I go to the kitchen and have a cup of coffee." Or "Then I take a shower, put on my clothes and comb my hair."

You used the plural "children," then referred to "he." They should agree, either singular or plural. (child/he children/they)

Sometimes you use "a" insteand of "I."

Run a spell check on the piece when you're done.

Keep up the good work.

Answer 2

usually get up at seven o´ clock.I go to the kitchen. I HAVE a cup COFFEE.After I GO to the livingroom and study English grammar.
I'M A student from 7:00 to 9:00.
After that I go to the bathroom and take a shower.Then I put on my clothes and comb my hair.After that I go to the kitchen and I cook FOR my family.I usually cook eggs.We usually drink milk in the morning.
I always play with my children.After that SOMETIMES HE goes to the bedroom.Later he sleeps FOR one hour.I always like to kiss my husband and we like to go to the MOVIES.
After that I cook. we eat together. we often drink JUICE WITH the food.we rarely watch TV.
My son likes to play ON the computer then he SLEEPS at nine o´ clock.
My husband and I ALWAYS GO to sleep after midnight.

Answer 3

I usually get up at seven o´ clock. I go to the kitchen. I take (do you mean 'drink' here?) a cup of coffee. After that I go to the living room and I study English grammar.
I am student from 7:00 to 9:00.
After that I go to the bathroom and take a shower.Then I put on my clothes and comb my hair. After that I go to the kitchen and I cook for my family. I usually cook eggs. We usually drink milk in the morning.
I always play with my child. After that he sometimes goes to his bedroom. Later he sleeps for one hour. I always like to kiss to my husband and we like to go to the movies.
After that I cook. Then we eat together. We often drink juice with the food. We rarely watch the TV.
My son likes to play on the computer around this time. Then he goes to sleep at nine o´clock.
My husband and I aways to go to to sleep after midnight.

Try some conjunctions other than "after that" and widen your different sentence structures. I hope that helps. (By the way, I looked at several of the answers submitted before me, and they didn't correct all of the grammatical errors. The only ones that are to be of any help at all are the ones from bja_faith and tonalc1.)

Answer 4

I usually get up at seven o´ clock.I go to the kitchen.I get a cup of coffee.After that i go to the living room and I study English and grammar.
I am a student from 7:00 to 9:00.
After that I go to the bathroom and take a shower.Then I put on my clothes and comb my hair.After that I go to the kitchen and I cook for my family.I usually cook eggs.We usually drink milk in the morning.
I always play with my children.After that i sometimes go to the bedroom.Later we sleep for one hour.i always like to kiss my husband and we like to go to the movies.
After that I cook.Then we eat together. we often drink juice for the food.we rarely watch the TV.
My son likes to play with the computer then he sleeps at nine o´ clock.
My husband and I aways to go to to sleep after midnight.

Answer 5

I usually get up at seven o´ clock. Then I go to the kitchen, take a cup coffee, and go to the living room and I study English grammar.
I am a student i that class from 7:00 to 9:00.
After that I go to the bathroom and take a shower. Then I put on my clothes and comb my hair. Next I go to the kitchen and I cook for my family. I usually cook eggs & we usually drink milk in the morning.
I always play with my children. After that my husband sometimes goes to the bedroom. Later he sleeps for about one hour. My husband and I always like to kiss & have a wonderful time at the movies. After that I cook and my family & I eat together. We often drink juice along with the delicous food. We rarely ever watch the TV.
My son likes to play with the computer then he sleeps at nine o´ clock.
My husband and I aways to go to to sleep after midnight.

Good Luck! ^_^

Answer 6

I usually get up at seven o´ clock.I go to the kitchen. I HAVE a cup OF coffe. After that I go to the living room and I study English grammar.
I STUDY from 7:00 to 9:00.
After that I go to the bathroom and take a shower.Then I put on my clothes and comb my hair. After that I go to the kitchen and I cook FOR my family. I usually cook eggs. We usually drink milk in the morning.
I always play with my CHILD. After that he sometimes go to the bedroom. Later he sleeps FOR one hour. I always like to kiss my husband and we like to go to the MOVIES.
After that I cook. Then we eat together. We often drink JUICE. We rarely watch TV.
My son likes to play with the computer then he SLEEPS at nine o´ clock.
My husband and I aways to go to to sleep after midnight.

I capitazlied all the words I changed. Good luck learning english.

Answer 7

I usually get up at seven o´ clock. I go to the kitchen. I drink a cup coffee. After that I go to the livingroom and study English grammar.
I am student from 7:00 to 9:00.
After that I go to the bathroom and take a shower. Then I put on my clothes and comb my hair. After that I go to the kitchen and I cook for my family. I usually cook eggs. We usually drink milk in the morning.
I always play with my children. After that he sometimes goes to the bedroom. Later he sleeps at one hour.a always like to kiss to my husband and we like to go to the movies.
After that I cook.Then we eat together. we often drink juice for the food. We rarely watch TV.
My son likes to play with the computer then he slepps at nine o´ clock.
My husband and I aways to go to to sleep after midnight.

I hope this helps if u need more help let me know. What laguage do you speak?

Answer 8

Hi, I am learning English. I need help correcting my mistakes. Points to the first person on, help me?

I usually get up at seven o´ clock. I go to the kitchen, have a cup coffee. After that, I go to the living room, and I study English Grammar. I am student from 7:00 to 9:00.

After that, I go to the bathroom and take a shower. I then put on my clothes and comb my hair. After that, I go to the kitchen and I cook eggs for family. and we drink milk.

I always play with my children. After that, my husband sometimes goes to the bedroom when he takes an hour nap. I love to kiss to my husband and we like going to the movies.

After that I cook lunch. Then we eat together. We often drink juice with lunch. We rarely watch the TV.
My son likes to play on the computer. Then he goes to bed at nine o´ clock.
My husband and I aways go to sleep after midnight.

Answer 9

I usually get up at seven o´ clock. I go to the kitchen. I take a cup coffee .After that I go to the livingroom and I study English and grammar.
I am student from 7:00 to 9:00.
After that I go to the bathroom and take a shower.Then I put on my clothes and comb my hair. After that I go to the kitchen and I cook for my family. I usually cook eggs. We usually drink milk in the morning.
I always play with my children. After that he sometimes goes to the bedroom. Later he sleeps for one hour. I always like to kiss to my husband and we like to go to the movies.
After that I cook.Then we eat together. We often drink juice for the food. we rarely watch TV.
My son likes to play with the computer then he goes to sleep at nine o´ clock.
My husband and I aways to go to to sleep after midnight.

if youre still trying to learn english youre doing very good. make sure you make it easier for the reader to know what the pronoun is standing in for.

Answer 10

I usually get up at seven in the morning. I go to the kitchen. I take a cup of coffee. After that I go to the living room and I study English grammar. I am student from seven to nine. After that I go to the bathroom and take a shower. Then I put on my clothes and comb my hair. After that I go to the kitchen and I cook for my family. I usually cook eggs. We usually drink milk in the morning.
I always play with my children. After that he sometimes goes to the bedroom. Later he sleeps for an hour. I always like to kiss to my husband and we like to go to the movies. After that I cook. Then we eat together. We often drink juice with the food. We rarely watch the TV. My son likes to play with the computer then he sleeps at nine. My husband and I always go to sleep after midnight.

Good overall, just a few errors!! Good luck!!

Answer 11

I usually get up at seven o' clock and go to the kitchen to make a cup of coffee. I then go into my living room and study English grammar from 7:00 to 9:00.
After I am done studying I go to the bathroom to take a shower. I continue my morning by getting dressed, combing my hair, and returning to the kitchen to cook my family breakfast. We normally eat eggs and have milk to drink.
I am very good about always playing with my son. After we are done playing he will take a nap in his bedroom for about an hour.
My husband and I like to go to the movies together and I always enjoy kissing him.
In the evenings I cook dinner and we eat together. We will ofter have juice with our dinner. We rarely watch TV, but my son does play computer before going to bed at nine. My husband and I always go to sleep after midnight.


Good luck with your studies!