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The Second Party must carry out duties given to them by the First Party based on the Work Plan approved by the First Party or the party(ies) appointed by the First Party as stated in the mechanism of Aceh Aid, *with all of* their capabilities, expertise and experiences*.
2007-01-15 01:03:08 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
"With all their capabilities" is probably a bit better, but it's not clear what that clause is attached to, or what its purpose is. Are you talking about the second party, the first party, or the party(ies) appointed by the first party? I assume you want to say that the second party must use everything they have to carry out the duties. The change I'd make is to clarify that. Perhaps move the clause to the beginning ("The second party must carry out with all their capabilities...") or make it separate sentence.
2007-01-15 01:10:43 · answer #1 · answered by Gary B 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The subject of the sentence "the Second Party" is singular, so it should be "with of of its capabilitities," etc.
The first sentence should read "duties given to it"
2007-01-15 09:12:44 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
"appointed as having capabilities, expertise and experience in the matter."
2007-01-15 10:07:46 · answer #3 · answered by Doethineb 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Drop the 'of' in ' with all of '
2007-01-15 09:11:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋