"a CD of him singing and dancing" is there something wrong with it? is there a better way to say it?
2007-01-14 20:29:24 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
That's not a sentence.
2007-01-14 20:33:17 · answer #1 · answered by Sterz 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is a DVD of him singing and dancing. You can not see someone dancing on a CD. You can only hear them sing on a CD.
2007-01-15 04:15:18 · answer #2 · answered by 14 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
some, especially the non-native speakers of english may wonder who or what is singing and dancing- the cd or the person. do you think the sentence" a CD showing him/featuring him singing and dancing will be better?
2007-01-14 20:36:17 · answer #3 · answered by lilac4u 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This is a cd of (the artist) singing and dancing.
2007-01-14 20:37:49 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is a CD of him singing and dancing,
2007-01-14 20:34:08 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
how can a person dance on a cd unless you stand on a cd and dance
2007-01-14 20:35:15 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
looks fine to me....needs a subject though...like "This is a CD of him....."...or needs to be turned into a subject as "A CD of him.........is available at the store"
2007-01-14 20:45:06 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
"A CD, humbly displaying his unfathomable talent in vocals and the art of dance."
Gooder?
2007-01-14 20:34:38 · answer #8 · answered by ©Œnter¢o®€ 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋