You just need to add a comma after issue and agenda...............:)
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After seeing all other comments, I'm now even more positive my response is the finest....:)
2007-01-13 23:01:48
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answered by Minx 7
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It is recommended that the board includes the reintegration and reconciliation issues in its rehabilitation and reconstruction programme. This should be put on the agenda and treated with importance and as a matter of urgency
I do not know whether this looks clearer to you .
I do hope so.
2007-01-13 23:47:30
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answer #2
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answered by raj k 3
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this should be the correct --- ... so that the Board can make the reintegration and reconciliation issue which will be added to the agenda because it is urgent and very important on the rehabilitation ands reconstruction....
2007-01-13 23:03:21
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answer #3
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answered by Jesus M 7
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That is not the entire sentence. What comes before and what comes after? Of what is there, the word agenda needs some sort of modifier. In other words, what kind of agenda?
2007-01-13 23:03:04
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answer #4
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answered by Edward W 2
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"Upon viewing" is genuinely the appropriate decision, and grammatically maximum appropriate besides. remember that the action picture identify merits that's very own set of citation marks. possibly Italics could be appropriate besides.
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answered by ? 4
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Why are you asking this here? Here at Yahoo Answers, it's mandatory to be grammatically incorrect!
2007-01-13 23:03:26
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answer #6
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answered by MJ 2
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That's a short sentence?
I think it's grammatically correct, if not wordy and just plain akward to get your head around. Using 'as' twice consecutively as a connective confuses things I find.
2007-01-13 22:56:08
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answered by Deconstitutionalization 4
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You have only put a portion of the sentence up to evaluate. In and of itself, no it is not. There is no subject and it ends in a semicolon. If you want a sentence grammar checked, please include the whole thing.
2007-01-13 22:57:45
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answered by pebble 6
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In addition to being awkward and unclear in its meaning and intent, it is not a sentence.
2007-01-13 23:02:10
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answered by cat m 4
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Looks O. K to me
2007-01-13 22:55:48
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answered by akband 4
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