every minute that passes we take it for granted
every hour that passes we argue and fight
every day that goes by we take for granted
always sayin we have tomorrow for tomorrow might not come
we always say what we dont mean only to bring down some else
but everyday someone leaves this world
and every minute someone is dying
we take life for granted never realzing our time may soon be up
we laugh and talk,play around and fight for tommorrow we may not see what god has gave us today
so charish each day like its your very last for tomorrow may not come.
2007-01-13 19:11:05 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Quotations
sorry 4 some words bein misspelled
2007-01-13 19:12:01 · update #1
Nice poem especially for a 15 yr old. If you want your poems to read better, do not repeat the same word too often, some punctuation marks to be added- especially when you want a pause, some lines should not be too long and like you said you could improve your spellings too. All in all , a nice thoughtful poem. You should keep writing a few lines each week on topics you feel strongly about. Good work.
2007-01-13 20:07:38 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
putting jointly words that rhyme to make a short sentence isn't a poem each poem doesnt ought to rhyme.... enable it bypass evidently... google some poems to get an theory of ways a poem must be written! good success!
2016-10-31 01:36:31 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice.
2007-01-13 19:19:52 · answer #3 · answered by Autumn_Anne 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cool job. u just realized the power of writing. Now ull only get better!!!
2007-01-13 19:19:58 · answer #4 · answered by Celticgreen 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it! It is very thoughtful. Keep writing things like this - it reminds us all how lucky we are.
2007-01-13 19:14:40 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
great. u know i came to the same realization before last summer
2007-01-13 19:21:53 · answer #6 · answered by Cole 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow dats somethin deep write a book i love it
2007-01-13 19:16:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's awesome!
that's the truth!
i'm smaller than you and i am also interested in poetry and i amn getting a inspiration from your poem!
2007-01-13 22:25:31 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thumbs up!!!
2007-01-13 19:20:43 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's great.
I simply loved it.
Keep up.
Would like to hear from you more..
2007-01-13 20:09:38 · answer #10 · answered by ravish2006 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋